Question 1: 2.5/3
Question 2: 1.5/4.5
Grammar/ organization: 2.5/2.5
You could work on strengthening your arguments using the class material.
Q1: the extremely inelastic demand allows monopolies to have a large markup.
Q2: this is an example of multi-market (3rd degree) price discrimination since cross country markets are independent (imports are illegal).