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w21036635 Research summative final.docx
by Keerthana SEKAR
Submission date: 17-Jan-2022 02:23PM (UTC+0000) Submission ID: 169325717 File name: w21036635_Research_summative_final.docx (49.2K) Word count: 4927 Character count: 27503
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w21036635 Research summative final.docx ORIGINALITY REPORT
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FINAL GRADE
44/100 w21036635 Research summative final.docx GRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor
Keerthana did a good literature review although justification could have been stronger. Her methodology and study design are not supporting her research question (intervention evaluation). There is no discussion on how this study will contribute to public health policy.
Moderated and agreed CC
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word count?
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reference needed
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ref needed
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psychological therapy?
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ref needed
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what is new? it is an update, or use of indepth methodology, or recent developments in mindfulness therapies that may show even better impact?
Comment 7
Since your study is not specific to breast cancer only, you could have mentioned other types of cancers.
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Comment 8
Anxiety should be included in the research question if this is the aim of your study.
Comment 9
is it an evaluaion of before after intervention or intervention vs control...or what? how will you know that meditation will change anything at all?
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how will you compare whether the intervention is beneficial or not.
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where located is crucial here
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What does this mean?
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Condescending.
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where is your sample size calculation?
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what does that mean?
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You have described the assessment scales only, but did not detail how the intervention will be delivered (set-up, frequency, monitoring and follow-up) which is key to your study.
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Are all of these statistical tests necessary to analyse one data set?
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How can you know there will be outliers before you conduct the study?
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what do you mean?
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