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Anne Peng EAP 1 5.3.2018

The Family rules

I was born from Chinese family and I lived in China Until I came to America when I was 15

years old. I lived in a host family in America and I saw many different in Chinese and American

families, and I talk to Hayword, and I think it was funny and there was a big difference between me

and his family.

His family is form Georgia and my family is form China, firstly I want talk identical between

we as family. Spank，He said his parents would spank him when he was young，and when I was

young my mother doesn't communicate much with me. She is a bad-tempered person before I leave

home, and she spank me when she thought I was wrong, so my family is tougher than his. The

second is that parents help pay for school.When I asked him about who paid for your colleges, he

said “I was lucky that his parents helped pay for my tuition”. also I similar to he, I came to America

when I was in high school, But I didn't know, it was my father's arrangement. Until now, my family

helped me pay for everything.Our family is different in terms of religion, art, divorce, grades and

children. My family is a religion without religion, and I have never met Christianity in China.But

when I came to America, my host family was Christian, so I followed them to the church every

week. In terms of family, Chinese parents may not divorce for the sake of their children, but I think

he doesn't care about his parents' divorce, he is a person with a strong opinion.In art, I haven't

studied music, but I have learned to dance, because my parents think dancing can improve my

temperament.

In conversation with him, I find that American parents are not like in the movies, although

before I was in contact with family in the United States, but every family still has a lot of different,

perhaps because of the international countries.