Assignment 8 Wal
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Hi Tylecia,
If you want to maximize your learning you have to pay attention to the details outlined in the assignment instructions and rubrics. Remember you are an actor in the simulation. Review announcements. See below. Bob Frost, CEO of Anthony’s Orchard, will be making a presentation to a number of international investors and managers via web conference. He has asked the members of his executive team to draft an e-mail providing him with tools, tips, and resources to ensure an effective meeting.
You do a good job with your assignment. If you want to take the next step in your growth as a scholar-practitioner you have to work on your technical writing skills.
Other: Do not include discussion prompts. As a graduate student, you should be able to write without them. Learn how to use headings.
What does it mean going above and beyond in its operations? This is unclear.
NOTE: Just because you have a diverse workforce does not mean people automatically feel appreciated. Watch the hyperbole.
Write explicitly and with clear examples. Reference sources by name. Say author is unclear and become confusing when discussing multiple authors.
Be sure to cite your sources correctly. This is an incorrect in-text citation: Metacognitive Strategies for Effective Interaction Across Cultures: Global Leaders Perspective.
Review your guide for headings, source referencing.
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