On the written assignment, I highlighted several areas that needed improvement on your paper for feedback:
1. Title Page - Missing school affiliation (AMU and/or APUS - spelled out) - This information is found in the APA Manual.
2. Three additional places where citations were needed (actually there were a couple more that I probably should have designated).
3. Two uses of vernacular expressions (these are best not used in scholarly assignments - Not always good to write like you talk).
4. All non-web citations should include the appropriate page number(s).
5. Best not to use "I's" (first person references) in a scholarly paper. Write in the 3rd person.
6. The "Goffena" source listed on the Reference Page was a Journal that requires the Volume and page number(s).