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Your paper is not in APA format, missing running header, page number, as well as other formatting errors. See the APA 6th edition manual for clarification. Additionally, your introductory paragraph needs to have a clear thesis statement at the end of it letting your reader know what the remainder of the paper will be about. Improper in-text citation for personal interview noted. Also, incorrect format used for direct quotes greater than 40 words and in some cases missing or incorrect in-text requirements. You conclusion is underdeveloped and missing a recap o main themes. Reference page is not in proper format. What you have to say is on the right track, work on the items noted.