First the introduction must be changed, all of it:
He said you have to start talking about how researchers start doing researches about linguistic phenomena on online platform since about 2000 I think , and then mention these studies such as speech acts , supportive language ,, etc “ studies and others , then talk the ones that I gave it to you which one in “ Irane and the other in Algeria “ , then talk about about “ self-praise and self-denigration” , and that is a few of them done about this topic but none for the knowledge of the writer is done about Jordanian youth so I have to add my voice here
And the theory didn’t work , now he want “ spencer-oatey / Rapport management “
And the “AIM of study he didn’t like them, redo it
And the material, I have to classify how I will collect data and what I goanna use and how I will analyze it