Question

What I need

For the Introduction:

· I need the this as my research topic statement in the last paragraph of the introduction.

“I study in this Capstone on how the commercial sector are victimized by ACH scams and what practices they can do to prevent being victimized”

· Currently my introduction has a lot of detail about general ACH Scams, But I want you to add detail about the commercial sector being victimized by ACH scams in my introduction.

· This is feedback from my teacher which I also need incorporated and fixed. Please read it thoroughly and fix everything they stated:

“Arij, this is a good start to the Capstone process and provides a better perspective than your initial topic statement. We suggest that you focus on a particular scam, country, and/or method to narrow the focus. “

This comment above from the professor can be fixed if you include the details I gave you above

For the Literature Review:

· I need the focus to be on Themes. This is what they care about. The current version does not fit the format. And remember my research topic is on how the commercial sector are victimized by ACH scams and what practices they can do to prevent being victimized, so sources should be correlating

· This is the feedback from the professor I need fixed:

Arij, this is a good start on the literature review, but it needs some work to fit the format. In the literature review, we recommend that you talk about “themes” as opposed to “research questions.” If you are posing questions, include those in the methodology that we talked about in our latest class period. In some of the discussions, you have far more data/research than is necessary. Remember the focus is on the arguments and not on content, so trim some of this. With Goodchild, please provide the title of the webpage rather than refer to it in the generic. Please proof your work. There are several incomplete sentences, and you use the passive voice extensively. As an example: “Details given by Maulidi and Ansell” should be Maulidi and Ansell provide details. Or: “The fraud is mitigated by the ACH network.” Write this actively: The ACH network mitigated this fraud.” Finally, please provide full citations in your bibliography.

For the Methodology:

· I got a 80/100 on this and I think we can do much better

· This is the feedback I need from need fixed given by teachers

Arij, this is a good start on your methodology, and we have suggested edits and additions for the final version. Please look to rephrase your research question as written in the first paragraph; it is an incomplete sentence. There are several other incomplete sentences throughout the paper. Also, it is best practice to avoid contractions in formal writing. With the content, please simply address your sub-questions without the preparatory sentences. Look to remove the bullets in sub-question #4. Finally, please remove definitions at the end of the paper.

Final Instructions:

· I am attaching AsiaWatsons final paper version. Make sure our work follows the exact same way and concept

· Correct all the grammatical mistakes. There are far too many. In the Literature Review and Methodology you did, I got points taken off because of grammatical errors and that is not acceptable.

· I am attaching a guideline/outline as well for what the final version should look like. Make sure it fits that work

· If you have any additional questions for me, reach me out.

· Please do your best to complete this in 24hrs and these are all instructions. My entire class grade depends on this so make sure you put your best work in.