Government

I need you to take a look at the findings module and rework your paper for submission.

Once that is done...upload it here and email me to let me know.

you will need to add a deeper analysis to the Discussion and conclusion to get you to the 60-page minimum for the thesis.

Please address all of my comments and look forward to your submission

· So I need to make it to 60 pages

· Concentrate on the Discussion section and Conclusion

· I needed 30 more pages.