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This is where you start actually writing.  Section 1, as we have discussed is about demonstrating your knowledge of core principles, concepts and theories in your field.  Key words in that statement are "demonstrate"......ok, there's only one!  :) The most common mistake in this section is that you discuss but do not demonstrate.  

Another key to this sentence:  Notice that there is nothing in there about classes.  We do not want class descriptions - we can look those up in the catalog.  We do not want lists of projects you had to do in each class.  Focus on the core skills, principles, concepts.....In Graphics class, for example, what is one of the theories you MUST know?  Talk about - and then demonstrate that you know it.  Tell the story of that concept.  Be brief, be specific, then add an example to demonstrate.  A chart, a graph, a picture....You may use links as long as you discuss the concept and lead people to the link.

This entire section is maybe 1 1/2 to 2 pages of writing.  You will add pictures, charts, graphs, etc.

Finally one more thing to focus on:  Writing.  Grammar.  English...this is a technical paper that might represent you and OSU in the industry.  Watch your grammar!