second draft
kilisol1467:HIV_(1).docx by Lucia Kiliso
Submission date: 27-Apr-2021 07:00AM (UTC-0400) Submission ID: 1571278689 File name: 03_Assignments_0ff337cf-3e94-413e-bed7-0001c4eb2676_HIV__1.docx (20.7K) Word count: 684 Character count: 3775
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kilisol1467:HIV_(1).docx ORIGINALITY REPORT
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"HIV/AIDS in South Africa 25 Years On", Springer Science and Business Media LLC, 2009 Publication
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kilisol1467:HIV_(1).docx GRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor
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Comment 1
Use MLA format. This is APA.
Comment 2
No headings in MLA format.
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Comment 3
Your using exact language here without quotation marks, which is plagiarism. Make sure you avoid this in your final draft.
Comment 4
Make your solutions clear in your thesis statement - the last sentence of your introduction paragraph.
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Comment 5
Introduce authors with a bit of info on who they are. Why are they trustworthy?
Comment 6
explore a single solution - you don't have to fully solve the problem. What is one thing we can do or proposal we can support to start addressing the problem?
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Comment 7
Use MLA format.
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