Essay

First draft by Aminata Sillah

Submission date: 05-Mar-2021 07:58PM (UTC-0800) Submission ID: 1525620572 File name: 223186_101875803_1066586694_First_draft.pdf (98.9K) Word count: 1094 Character count: 6276

20% SIMILARITY INDEX

16% INTERNET SOURCES

19% PUBLICATIONS

12% STUDENT PAPERS

1 7% 2 4% 3 4% 4 2%

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First draft ORIGINALITY REPORT

PRIMARY SOURCES

academic.oup.com Internet Source

www.mdpi.com Internet Source

www.tandfonline.com Internet Source

Jing Fan, Akshith Ullal, Linda Beuscher, Lorraine C. Mion, Paul Newhouse, Nilanjan Sarkar. "Field Testing of Ro-Tri, a Robot- Mediated Triadic Interaction for Older Adults", International Journal of Social Robotics, 2021 Publication

Ophélie Glachet, Mohamad El Haj. "Emotional and Phenomenological Properties of Odor- Evoked Autobiographical Memories in Alzheimer’s Disease", Brain Sciences, 2019 Publication

Tao Wang, Shuang-Feng Xu, Yong-Gang Fan, Lin-Bo Li, Chuang Guo. "Chapter 5 Iron Pathophysiology in Alzheimer’s Diseases",

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Springer Science and Business Media LLC, 2019 Publication

FINAL GRADE

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First draft GRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

PAGE 1

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word.

PAGE 2

P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. You may want to revise it using the active voice.

Prep. You may be using the wrong preposition.

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word.

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word.

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word.

Missing "," Review the rules for using punctuation marks.

S/V This subject and verb may not agree. Proofread the sentence to make sure the subject agrees with the verb.

Confused You have used either an imprecise word or an incorrect word.

Run-on This sentence may be a run-on sentence.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

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Sp. This word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proofread your work.

Proofread This part of the sentence contains an error or misspelling that makes your meaning unclear.

S/V This subject and verb may not agree. Proofread the sentence to make sure the subject agrees with the verb.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. You may want to revise it using the active voice.

Missing "," Review the rules for using punctuation marks.

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word.

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Possessive

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the article the.

Sp. This word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proofread your work.

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the article the.

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the article the.

S/V This subject and verb may not agree. Proofread the sentence to make sure the subject agrees with the verb.

S/V This subject and verb may not agree. Proofread the sentence to make sure the subject agrees with the verb.

S/V This subject and verb may not agree. Proofread the sentence to make sure the subject agrees with the verb.

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S/V This subject and verb may not agree. Proofread the sentence to make sure the subject agrees with the verb.

Missing "," Review the rules for using punctuation marks.

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RUBRIC: PROGRESS REPORT I

TITLE PAGE (10%)

BEGINNING (1)

INTERMEDIATE (2)

ADVANCED (3)

LIT REVIEW (35%)

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INTERMEDIATE (2)

ADVANCED (3)

INTRODUCTION (35%)

BEGINNING (1)

INTERMEDIATE (2)

ADVANCED (3)

GRAMMAR (10%)

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Descriptive Title Name & Contact Info Date of Submission

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inclusive of in-text citations and works cited

0 / 3

Research Question/Objective Hypothesis

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inclusive of writing mechanics

ONTIME SUBMIT (10%)

BEGINNING (1)

INTERMEDIATE (2)

ADVANCED (3)

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