Your paper has a lot of really good background information but is completely missing primary source evidence. (An example from the textbook or lectures is fine, but this is not primary source evidence). This is the most important aspect of your paper. Each paragraph should have a bit of introductory information about the topic, then follow that up with evidence to support the topic, then an analysis of that evidence to further illuminate the topic. If you have any questions about this, please let me know.
Citations- Make sure to follow the guide on Canvas.