clrd

comment：

Your paper does not meet the requirements of this assignment and appears to be a compilation of research about a short story that was not in the right form.

Instructions

close-reading：https://southerncrossreview.org/73/axolotl.html

1.resource

I'm attaching a couple of resources to this email for your reference. The first is a webpage with information on writing a strong thesis statement (I pulled a lot of my information today from here). 

http://www.cws.illinois.edu/workshop/writers/tips/thesis/ 

The second is a webpage that explains what close-reading is, as I realize that this is a new process for many of you. 

 https://writingcenter.fas.harvard.edu/pages/how-do-close-reading

2. This paper should be based on an argument, like : Time, Space, Conflict, in the stories.

3. 5 paragraph，Intro，3 x body-paragraph, conclusion. ( 3-5 pages )

4. Each body-paragraph need a quote from the story （Axolotl）

5. body-paragraph like

Topic Sentence

Concrete Detail

Commentary

Commentary

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— transition

6. Only quotes from the story (axolotl)