IDS 400 ( week 6)

IDS 400 Feedback Week 4 and Week 5:

Week 4 Feedback :

Mohammed,

Great work on your 4-2 Activity! The main improvement is to increase the amount of

references you cite throughout this section.

Additionally, your paper references teens but I have your thesis as focusing on 20-30 year

olds, which is outside of the teen realm. Ensure that your research and paper are aligning

properly with the approved thesis.

Please see my detailed feedback in the rubric and TurnItIn. Let me know what questions

you have moving forward.

The grade does reflect a 10% deduction due to tardiness

Week 5 Feedback :

Mohammed,

Good work on your 5-2 assignment! The assignment overall is off to a good start, it just

needs some more specific examples in each section. There are also some questions I left for

you in TurnItIn in areas that require clarification before the final submission.

We are nearing the end of our analysis of this subject. We will be submitting the final

combined paper during Module Seven. Please take the next week to go back through your

earlier assignments and begin making edits and adjustments if you have not already.

See my detailed feedback in the rubric and TurnItIn. Let me know what questions you

have moving forward.