P3
FEEDBACK PV3
Learning Objective 1.1: Describe leadership style and temperament.
Response vaguely or incompletely describes leadership style and temperament.
Criterion Feedback
Thank you for your description of leadership style and temperament. Please note that leadership style with benefit from support via competency resources. This is an expectation for each of the concepts presented in your paper.
Learning Objective 1.2 Explain how personal experiences and leadership style influences authentic leadership capacity.
Response demonstrates the same level of achievement as “2,” plus the following:
Response includes a critical analysis of personal experience, as it relates one’s own leadership capacity.
Criterion Feedback
Thank you for your description. You did a nice job in your applications.
Learning Objective 2.1: Explain how emotional intelligence applies to leadership in early childhood contexts.
Response provides a vague or incomplete explanation.
Criterion Feedback
I would encourage you to expand your discussion of emotional intelligence. Please also be sure to support these connections with competency resources, inclusive of in-text citations and references.
Learning Objective 3.1: Explain how emotional intelligence, authentic leadership, and knowledge of leadership style apply to leadership challenges.
Response clearly explains how emotional intelligence, authentic leadership, and knowledge of leadership style will be used to address both challenges presented in the scenario.
Response is supported by logical connections to the professional knowledge base.
Criterion Feedback
Thank you for your overview. You did a nice job in your application, particularly in the area of temperament.
Learning Objective 4.1: Apply strategies to address ethical challenges.
Response provides a vague or incomplete description of strategies to address the ethical dilemma presented in the scenario.
Criterion Feedback
Please be sure to apply the Code to each of the scenarios presented.
Learning Objective 5.1: Apply strategies for managing change in early childhood contexts.
Response provides a vague or irrelevant description of strategies to manage change and assist resistant staff.
Criterion Feedback
Good general description. I would encourage you to provide a bit more expansion, inclusive of connections to competency resources.
Written Communication PS 1.1: Use proper grammar, spelling, and mechanics.
Writing reflects competent use of standard edited American English.
Errors in grammar, spelling, and/or mechanics do not negatively impact readability.
Written Communication PS 1.2: Organize writing to enhance clarity.
Writing sufficiently integrates appropriate resources (which may include peer-reviewed resources) and content in support of ideas and argument.
Written Communication 1.3: Support writing with appropriate resources.
Writing loosely integrates some appropriate resources and content in support of ideas and argument.
Criterion Feedback
Please see my feedback regarding additional opportunities for incorporation of resources.
Written Communication 1.4: Apply APA style to written work.
APA conventions for attribution of sources, structure, formatting, etc., are generally applied correctly in most instances. Sources are generally cited appropriately and accurately.