PEER REVIEW

Feedback for deliverable 7. Please review and correct my work asap. This work worth 28% of the total work. Please see below feedback from instructor and correct accordingly

Thank you for your deliverable 7 submission. The feedback below corresponds to each section of the grading rubrics for this deliverable.  

 

Section 1: Grade 4.  Good job!  Specific and accurate description of the background and significance of healthcare concern (including incidence and distribution). You have demonstrated mastery in this component of the deliverable. 

Section 2:  Grade 4.  Very well done!  Three objectives of the campaign are detailed and clearly stated.  You have demonstrated mastery in this component of the deliverable. 

Section 3:  Grade 2.  Great rationale for choosing your target audience.  You mentioned one social determinant but not ethical concerns or human rights violations in this particular population.  Target audience (including  social determinants,   ethical concerns, and human rights)  is accurate and  described in detail.   You have demonstrated competency in this component of the deliverable. 

Section 4:  Grade 2.  As I mentioned in an earlier delivery, a broad population is going to be a problem.   The methods you have listed will not work for everyone in the world.  What about people in remote regions of Africa?  Also, will poor populations be able to travel to these seminars or have technology for Zoom?  Methods for implementation (materials, communication tools, activities, etc.) are accurate and described in detail.  You have demonstrated competency in this component of the deliverable. 

Section 5:  Grade 2.  You should include examples of specific information that you would convey.  Information to convey (key messages and campaign slogan) is accurate and  described in detail.   You have demonstrated competency in this component of the deliverable. 

Section 6:  Grade 3.  Wouldn’t you want your evaluation strategy to determine if the campaign was successful rather than just the number of people reached?  Evaluation strategy is accurate and described in detail. You have demonstrated proficiency in this component of the deliverable. 

Section 7:  Grade 4. Timeline for the campaign is described in detail.  You have demonstrated mastery in this component of the deliverable. 

Please review my feedback and give this a little more thought.   You are on the right track.  You have one more attempt for this deliverable.  I look forward to your next submission.