Below are the areas of the paper with feedback to be revised.
Writing Plan: Argument
· Describes the argument to be addressed through the essay, including how the argument is derived from major that is being considered or field of work
Writing Plan: Key Points
· Determines key points and rationale that will be helpful in supporting the validity of the argument.
· Mostly aligned with argument, but you mentioned one line about unintended consequences that got me thinking. This is already legal in some places. What exactly are the unintended consequences? I mean, people who want to die, die. Is that it? See note on doc.
Writing Plan: Audience
· Identifies audience and determines potential challenges
· Doctors? Or voters? I was a little confused.