HeLp2!

Please see feedback from instructor and correct the RED

The work got a F.

Feedback 3/3/21

Thank you for submitting deliverable #7. Please see the feedback for this assessment below.

 

Row 1- 4/4 Succinct, a well-constructed summary of the priority gap in services within the local community.

 

Row 2- 4/4 Comprehensive background information with a detailed explanation of the priority need, including identifying all health determinants. This represents mastery of this item in the rubric.

 

Row 3- 1/4 Few phases of implementation were included without SMART goals or explanations of financial, policy, legal, and ethical considerations.

 

Row 4- 2/4 Basic description of most of the strategies for collaboration with external and internal stakeholders to gain buy-in.

 

Row 5- 4/4 Comprehensive description of the plan for initial and ongoing communication and dissemination of information. This represents mastery of this item in the rubric.

 

Row 6- 4/4 Concise, powerful conclusion demonstrating that the proposed solution is necessary. This represents mastery of this item in the rubric.

 

Row 7- 1/4 Proposal does not include evidence from credible sources. Please see my comments for areas that need more literature to support your ideas.

 

Row 8- 3/4 Communication is professional, well-constructed, and succinct, and contains an appropriate level of detail. Few spelling and grammar errors do not detract from the audience’s ability to comprehend the material.

 

 

Row 9- 4/4 Sources used are credible, support the purpose of the assignment, and contain insignificant to no APA errors. This represents mastery of this item in the rubric.