Assessment 4 Instructions: Health Promotion Plan Presentation

Perla1427
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Hi Perla, Thank you for getting back to me. I compared it with assessment 1 as soon as I saw the score. I see some of the SafeAssign issues are in the reference section as well as the first assessment. However, the first assessment should be minimal as the 4th assessment is the implementation of your plan.  Only minor content should be exactly the same if any.  I hope this makes sense. 

Dr. Giambra

Good afternoon Perla, I am sorry to see that SafeAssign has identified some areas of your assessment as word-for-word quotes from student papers (76%). This is considered plagiarism. Even accidental plagiarism is considered plagiarism at Capella University.  

As per Capella policy, I must score this attempt as non-performance and fill out the academic honesty form.  I urge you to carefully review  SafeAssign  report to see the highlighted matches. Also, review the direct links that are in your Scoring Guide Feedback Tool to learn more about how to cite correctly.   

https://help.blackboard.com/SafeAssign/Student

https://help.blackboard.com/SafeAssign/Student/Avoid_Plagiarism

  https://campus.capella.edu/academic-honesty-and-apa/home

https://campus.capella.edu/writing-center/home

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COMPETENCY 1

Evaluate health policies, based on their ability to achieve desired outcomes.

CRITERION

Evaluate educational session outcomes in terms of progress made toward Healthy People 2030 objectives and leading health indicators.

Your result: Non-Performance

Distinguished

Evaluates educational session outcomes in terms of progress made toward Healthy People 2030 objectives and leading health indicators. Clearly explains the need for revisions to better align future sessions with Healthy People 2030 objectives.

Proficient

Evaluates educational session outcomes in terms of progress made toward Healthy People 2030 objectives and leading health indicators.

Basic

Evaluates educational session outcomes unrelated to progress toward Healthy People 2030 objectives and leading health indicators.

Non-Performance

Does not evaluate educational session outcomes in terms of progress made toward Healthy People 2030 objectives and leading health indicators.

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COMPETENCY 2

Integrate principles of social justice in community health interventions.

CRITERION

Evaluate educational session outcomes and the attainment of agreed-upon health goals in collaboration with hypothetical participants.

Your result: Non-Performance

Distinguished

Evaluates educational session outcomes and the attainment of agreed-upon health goals in collaboration with hypothetical participants. Clearly explains the need for revisions to future educational sessions.

Proficient

Evaluates educational session outcomes and the attainment of agreed-upon health goals in collaboration with hypothetical participants.

Basic

Evaluates educational session outcomes and the attainment of health goals without collaborating with hypothetical participants.

Non-Performance

Does not evaluate educational session outcomes and the attainment of agreed-upon health goals in collaboration with hypothetical participants.

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COMPETENCY 3

Apply professional, scholarly communication strategies to lead health promotion and improve population health.

CRITERION

Present a health promotion plan to a hypothetical individual or a group within a community.

Your result: Non-Performance

Distinguished

Presents a professional, evidence-based, and engaging PowerPoint presentation. The plan is based on specific, identified health needs and goals, and is well supported by error-free slides that enhance key points and adhere to visual design best practices. The audio and speaker notes of the details of the educational session were clear and appropriate for the hypothetical audience.

Proficient

Presents a health promotion plan to a hypothetical individual or a group within a community. Slides enhance key points and adhere to visual design best practices, but no audio and/or speaker notes.

Basic

Presents a health promotion plan to a hypothetical individual or a group with a community that lacks clear purpose, coherence, or focus, or is supported by slides that add little value to the presentation, exhibit poor design, are hard to read, or include distracting slide transitions, animations, or graphics.

Non-Performance

Does not present a health promotion plan to a hypothetical individual or a group within a community.

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CRITERION

Organize content with clear purpose/goals and with relevant and evidence-based sources (published within 5 years).

Your result: Non-Performance

Distinguished

Organizes content with clear purpose/goals. Power point slides support main points, assertions, arguments, conclusions, or recommendations with relevant and evidence-based sources (published within 5 years).

Proficient

Organizes content with clear purpose/goals and with relevant and evidence-based sources (published within 5 years).

Basic

Organizes content with clear purpose/goals. Power point slides do not consistently support main points, assertions, arguments, conclusions, and/or recommendations with relevant and evidence-based sources (published within 5 years).

Non-Performance

Does not organize content with clear purpose/goals. Power point slides do not support main points, assertions, arguments, conclusions, or recommendations. Sources are not relevant and/or evidence-based (published within 5 years).

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CRITERION

Slides are easy to read and error free. Detailed audio, transcript, and speaker notes are provided. Audio is clear, organized, and professionally presented.

Your result: Non-Performance

Distinguished

Slides are easy to read and clutter free. Slide background is �visually� pleasing with a contrasting color for the text and may utilize graphics. Detailed audio, transcript, and speaker notes are provided. Audio is clear, organized, and professionally presented.

Proficient

Slides are easy to read and error free. Detailed audio, transcript, and speaker notes are provided. Audio is clear, organized, and professionally presented.

Basic

Slides are easy to read and error free. No audio or audio is not clear, difficult to hear, or not professionally presented. Transcript and speaker notes are sufficient support for the slides.

Non-Performance

Slides are difficult to read with multiple editing errors. No audio, transcript, and/or speaker notes provided.

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