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Is Keith Urban more associated with Australia than New Zealand?
how will consumers know this?
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THe description of the advertisement in PArt 2 seems more suitable for PARt 3 - it seems to me to be a detailed way of implementing your strategy. Your main strategy seems to be something about emphasing the functional health benefits of your product (but this is true for all almond milk products) and something about the product coming from New Zealand. Maybe you need to emphasise the New Zealand aspect of your product?
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AlmondMilkstrategy.edited.docx ORIGINALITY REPORT
PRIMARY SOURCES
vslir.iima.ac.in:8080 Internet Source
Submitted to University of Northumbria at Newcastle Student Paper
Submitted to Case Western Reserve University Student Paper
mumbrella.com.au Internet Source
FINAL GRADE
5/0 AlmondMilkstrategy.edited.docx GRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor
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Comment 1
Do you mean
the New Zealand market?
Article Error You may need to use an article before this word.
Sp. This word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proofread your work.
Confused You have used either an imprecise word or an incorrect word.
Article Error You may need to remove this article.
Comment 2
, consumers can
P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. You may want to revise it using the active voice.
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Prep. You may be using the wrong preposition.
Comment 3
are you sure? I do not think this is accurate.
Maybe you mean most Asians in New Zealand are intolerant ..
maybe your target market could be Asian kiwis?
Article Error You may need to use an article before this word.
PAGE 3
Article Error You may need to remove this article.
Text Comment. Is Keith Urban more associated with Australia than New Zealand?
P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. You may want to revise it using the active voice.
Article Error You may need to remove this article.
Prep. You may be using the wrong preposition.
Text Comment. how will consumers know this?
Article Error You may need to remove this article.
PAGE 4
Text Comment. this seems like your creative implementation part, ie. part 3?
Article Error You may need to use an article before this word.
Article Error You may need to remove this article.
PAGE 5
Sp. This word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proofread your work.
Article Error You may need to remove this article.
Article Error You may need to remove this article.
Article Error You may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the article the.
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Article Error You may need to remove this article.
Missing "," Review the rules for using punctuation marks.
Article Error You may need to remove this article.
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Text Comment. THe description of the advertisement in PArt 2 seems more suitable for PARt 3 - it seems to me to be a detailed way of implementing your strategy. Your main strategy seems to be something about emphasing the functional health benefits of your product (but this is true for all almond milk products) and something about the product coming from New Zealand. Maybe you need to emphasise the New Zealand aspect of your product?
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