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Criterion Score

Human Impact: Human Activities

9 points

Discusses how human activities impact the related ecological processes and supports discussion with examples

6.75 points

Discusses how human activities impact the related ecological processes but discussion is cursory or illogical, or supporting examples are not relevant or nonexistent

0 points

Does not discuss how human activities impact the related ecological processes

9/9

Criterion Feedback You discuss many issues associated with water pollution.
Human Impact: Local Community

9 points

Explains how human activities in the local community directly and indirectly impact the related ecological processes and supports explanation with examples

6.75 points

Explains how human activities in the local community impact the related ecological processes, but explanation is cursory or contains inaccuracies, or supporting examples are not relevant or nonexistent

0 points

Does not explain how human activities in the local community impact the related ecological processes

9/9

Criterion Feedback You discuss the impacts on a local community.
Potential Solutions: Potential Solutions

9 points

Identifies current potential solutions that have been proposed by the scientific community for mitigating the environmental issue, briefly describing each and supporting description with scientific facts

6.75 points

Identifies potential solutions for mitigating the environmental issue, describing each, but identified solutions are not current or not from the scientific community, descriptions contain inaccuracies, or supporting facts are irrelevant or contain inaccuracies

0 points

Does not identify potential solutions for mitigating the environmental issue

6.75/9

Criterion Feedback What does "responsible use of pesticides, fertilizers, and herbicides" entail? This, and other statements, need to be explained.
Potential Solutions: Advantages and Disadvantages

9 points

Explains the advantages and disadvantages of each proposed solution and supports explanation with scientific facts

6.75 points

Explains the advantages and disadvantages of each proposed solution but explanations are cursory or contain inaccuracies, or supporting facts are irrelevant or contain inaccuracies

0 points

Does not explain the advantages and disadvantages of each proposed solution

6.75/9

Criterion Feedback This section is unclear. You write: "The only disadvantage of this solution is that there is a high likelihood of changing the ecosystem if the contaminated water is magnified. " The point is to decrease contamination.
Potential Solutions: Human Behavior

9 points

Briefly describes how human behavior would have to change in order for the solutions to be effective and supports description with specific examples

6.75 points

Describes how human behavior would have to change in order for the solutions to be effective but description is verbose or contains inaccuracies, or supporting examples are irrelevant or nonexistent

0 points

Does not describe how human behavior would have to change in order for the solutions to be effective

6.75/9

Criterion Feedback What about the argument that some may use: "These chemicals are needed for farming and my livelihood." How does your answer address this?
Reducing Personal Impact: Personal Habits and Daily Activities

9 points

Identifies personal habits and daily activities that impact the ecological processes related to the larger environmental issue, describing the impact of each habit or activity

6.75 points

Identifies personal habits and daily activities that impact the ecological processes related to the larger environmental issue, describing the impact of each habit or activity, but response is cursory or contains inaccuracies

0 points

Does not identify personal habits and daily activities that impact the related ecological processes

6.75/9

Criterion Feedback You start with: "It is estimated that it only takes three weeks for a human being to create and form a healthy environment that slowly destroys the environment." This makes no sense. What are your personal habits and daily activities that impact the ecological processes related to water pollution?
Reducing Personal Impact: Daily Life

9 points

Describes how personal daily life impacts the chosen environmental issue based on the ecological impact of the previously identified habits and activities

6.75 points

Describes how personal daily life impacts the chosen environmental issue but description contains inaccuracies or is not based on the ecological impact of the previously identified habits and activities

0 points

Does not describe how personal daily life impacts the chosen environmental issue

6.75/9

Criterion Feedback The assignment states: "prioritize your previously identified habits and daily activities by which have the greatest impact on the environmental issue." This discussion is missing from your assignment.
Reducing Personal Impact: Previously Identified Habits

9 points

Prioritizes previously identified habits and daily activities by which have the greatest impact on the environmental issue and supports prioritization with scientific evidence

6.75 points

Prioritizes previously identified habits and daily activities by which have the greatest impact on the environmental issue but prioritization is incomplete or supporting evidence is irrelevant, inaccurate, or nonexistent

0 points

Does not prioritize previously identified habits and daily activities by which have the greatest impact on the environmental issue

6.75/9

Criterion Feedback Are these things that you do personally? Again, the assignment is about your personal habits and activities.
Reducing Personal Impact: Corresponding Habit or Activity

9 points

Explains how the corresponding habit or activity will be altered by the strategy and supports explanation with specific examples

6.75 points

Explains how the corresponding habit or activity will be altered by the strategy but explanation is cursory or supporting examples are irrelevant or nonexistent

0 points

Does not explain how the corresponding habit or activity will be altered by the strategy

6.75/9

Criterion Feedback Are you writing about yourself or to others in general. You write: "Lastly, ensure that you dispose of any trash properly." Is this something you need to work on?
Reducing Personal Impact: Mitigate Your Personal Contributions

9 points

Explains how the use of the strategy and corresponding changes in personal life will contribute to the previously identified potential scientific solutions and supports explanation with scientific facts

6.75 points

Explains how the use of the strategy and corresponding changes in personal life will contribute to the previously identified potential scientific solutions but explanation is cursory or contains inaccuracies or supporting facts are irrelevant, inaccurate, or nonexistent

0 points

Does not explain how the use of the strategy and corresponding changes in personal life will contribute to the previously identified potential scientific solutions

0/9

Criterion Feedback Again, what can you do to improve the situation?
Articulation of Response

10 points

Submission has no major errors related to citations, grammar, spelling, syntax, or organization

7.5 points

Submission has major errors related to citations, grammar, spelling, syntax, or organization that negatively impact readability and articulation of main ideas

0 points

Submission has critical errors related to citations, grammar, spelling, syntax, or organization that prevent understanding of ideas

7.5/10

Criterion Feedback There are a number of places where your writing has errors. For example, you write: "In my area, most of people impact water pollution in various ways." Please proofread before submitting your work.

Rubric Total ScoreTotal

72.75 / 100