Explorations in Leadership

FEEDBACK FOR M5 Draft PPT Slides

Hello Dear Student,

Good progress.

Refine your writing more, to be as succinct as possible. Slides 2 - 6 are all on the right track - but some really are long-winded and can be more succinct and precise.

e.g. Your aims slide could be more simple - you don't need three points. Make one clear statement

Also, proofread for writing errors throughout.

Your final statement on slide 8 needs to come at the top, to explain the terms.

Check throughout if you are paraphrasing. If there is any quoting then you MUST use quotation marks and page numbers.

Take time to view the sample PPT and also the link to examples of APA style.

You would save time in the end as your reference list still has some errors.

I believe I remember stating previously about the Bennett reference, how it needs the name of the organization before the ULR. e.g. ABC News (Australia)

Do the same for any other website article.

Space needed before 2016 on Bennett

Check italics for Greene book.