FW2

Accomplished

Needs Improvement

Not Acceptable

Introduction

Points Range:7 (17.50%) - 7 (17.50%)

• Clearly states the purpose of the paper. • Provides a comprehensive overview of topic or questions. • Engages the reader. • Organized and has easy follow.

Points:5 (12.50%)

Points Range:2 (5.00%) - 6 (15.00%)

• Overview is provided, but key points/ideas are missing. • Does not engage the reader. • Somewhat disorganized but still comprehensible

Feedback:

In your intro, work on making it a more comprehensive overview – give the reader an engaging first impression of your paper… then close out the paragraph with your purpose statement to transition into the body of your paper.

Points Range:0 (0.00%) - 1 (2.50%)

• Does not provide an overview of the paper or is absent. • No purpose statement. • No overview of topics. • Reader is distracted.

Family Members and Health History

Points:5 (12.50%)

Points Range:5 (12.50%) - 5 (12.50%)

• Describes each family member for three generations. • Identifies health problems for each family member focusing on genetic traits.

Points Range:2 (5.00%) - 4 (10.00%)

• Only includes two generations of family members. • Identifies health problems and focuses on genetic traits.

Points Range:0 (0.00%) - 1 (2.50%)

• Lists family members. • Omits ages and gender. • Does not provide health history for each member.

Family Members' Ethnic Background, Reproductive History, Growth and Development Variations

Points:5 (12.50%)

Points Range:5 (12.50%) - 5 (12.50%)

• Describes family's ethnic background. • Identifies reproductive history of family members. • Describes any family variations in growth and development. • If none are present, states such.

Points Range:2 (5.00%) - 4 (10.00%)

• Ethnic background and reproductive history is described. • Does explain if there are any variations in growth and development of family members and what they are.

Points Range:0 (0.00%) - 1 (2.50%)

• Does not include ethnic background, reproductive history, or growth and development variations for family members.

Family Understanding of Genetic Health Risks

Points:5 (12.50%)

Points Range:5 (12.50%) - 5 (12.50%)

• Thoroughly assesses to what extent the family understands their risk for genetic problems

Points Range:2 (5.00%) - 4 (10.00%)

• States family understands genetic health risks. • Does not identify to what extent.

Points Range:0 (0.00%) - 1 (2.50%)

• Omits family’s genetic health risk understanding

Identification of Genetic Health Risk problems and Nursing Intervention Strategies for Genetic Risk Reduction

Points:5 (12.50%)

Points Range:5 (12.50%) - 5 (12.50%)

• Includes questions family members have about genetic health risks. • Provides 2-3 nursing intervention strategies families can use to reduce genetic health risks. • Detailed implications on nursing care.

Points Range:2 (5.00%) - 4 (10.00%)

• Includes questions family members have about genetic health risks. • Provides less than two nursing intervention strategies for genetic health risk reduction.

Points Range:0 (0.00%) - 1 (2.50%)

• Does not identify genetic health related questions. • Does not include nursing strategies.

Conclusion

Points Range:7 (17.50%) - 7 (17.50%)

• Summarizes paper and reflects on what the reader has learned from the paper. • Demonstrates persuasive thought and is well organized.

Points:5 (12.50%)

Points Range:2 (5.00%) - 6 (15.00%)

• Merely summarizes the introduction or contains new ideas not present in the paper contents. • Somewhat disorganized but still comprehensible

Feedback:

work on your conclusion to make this a comprehensive recap of your paper – go into detail to make sure you summarize all of the major themes of the paper.

Points Range:0 (0.00%) - 1 (2.50%)

• Simply restates the introduction or is absent. • Disorganized to the point of distraction.

Stylistics

Points:6 (15.00%)

Points Range:6 (15.00%) - 6 (15.00%)

• APA Citations are appropriate. • Formatted correctly. • Reference page is complete and correctly formatted. • Minimum of three (3) total references: one (1) reference from required course materials and two (2) peer-reviewed references. *All references must be no older than five years. • More than 600 words excluding title and reference pages.

Points Range:3 (7.50%) - 5 (12.50%)

• APA Citations are appropriate and formatted correctly. • Reference page is formatted correctly. • References are not professional or is not formatted correctly. • Missing 1 professional reference. • At least 600 words or more excluding title and reference pages.

Points Range:0 (0.00%) - 2 (5.00%)

• No citations are used or citations are made but not formatted correctly • Reference page is missing. • Less than 600 words excluding title and reference pages.