Order 1122645: Literary Analysis of Giovannis Room

Evaluation Guide: Essay Student’s Name ________________

Possible points for assignment: 100

Your score on assignment _______

Developed by Steve Kaufman.

Evaluation Area

Specifics: Circle items of concern

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Points

Ideas & Insights 20 points

Does the essay express original insights about the topic? Can the reader clearly understand the significance of the material being presented? Is the writer’s purpose clear? Are key supporting ideas fully developed? Are there adequate details to make the meaning clear and give the writing impact? Has the writer supported key points and claims with convincing evidence? Is clear and relevant use made of outside sources? (If applicable)

Structure & Organization 20 points

Does the introduction engage the reader’s attention and establish the tone of the essay? Does the essay have a clear focus? Is the thesis clear? Are the paragraphs in the body of the essay unified (do they focus on one main idea)? Is the writing coherent (are paragraphs ordered in a logical manner)? Is there a satisfying progression of thought? Is the essay unified: does everything in the body relate to the thesis? Does the conclusion bring the essay to a satisfying close?

Grammar & Mechanics 20 points

Sentence errors (fragments, comma splices/run-ons)

Agreement errors Verb tense tense/verb form errors

Errors in punctuation, mechanics or spelling Other grammar concerns

Format and final presentation

Style & Language 20 points

Is language is clear, specific and appropriate to task? Is word choice effective? Does tone suit purpose?

Drafting Process 20 points

Are ideas more fully developed and the writing more polished with each draft? Is there clear evidence of responding to peer and instructor comments during the drafting process?

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