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Essay One 

  • ESSAY ONE, FINAL DRAFT DUE Wednesday, 23 September, 12:00 p.m. (remember, class does not meet on Wednesdays)
    • Submit Final Draft to Dropbox only
  • Previously, you should have completed the early draft and peer review worksheet described below, where you will also find the essay prompt included for your convenience.
  • Essay One, Early Draft DUE in class Thursday, 10 September, 12:00 p.m.
    • Submit Draft to Dropbox and peer review partner (email partner using Classlist).
      • Peer Review Partners announced on Folio “News” page
  • Peer Review Workshop for Essay One, Early Draft in class
    • Bring portable electronic device to access the following documents:
      •  Essay One Peer Review Worksheet (available on Folio)
        • You should also print a copy of the worksheet for your own use as you prepare your feedback for your partner.
      • Your partner’s Essay One, Early Draft (sent to your Folio email)
  • Essay One Peer Review Worksheet DUE no later than FRIDAY, 11 September, 5:00 p.m.
    • Submit Worksheet to Essay One Peer Review Worksheet Dropbox and peer review partner (email partner using Classlist).

Write a three-to-five page essay on the question below (that’s a minimum of three full pages, exclusive of Works Cited page, if applicable).  Your essay must have a thesis—a debatable argument—and that thesis must be stated clearly and succinctly at the end of the first paragraph.  Be sure to refer to specific passages in the stories in order to support your assertions; when doing so, use MLA methods of citation and documentation as explained in Chapters 12-14 of THE LITTLE PENGUIN HANDBOOK.  

Consult the format guidelines for essay writing beginning at the bottom page four of your syllabus (item #2, “Formal Written Assignments”).  

THE PROMPT:

Much like essay writers write essays to state an argument or prove a point, frequently, authors advance arguments in their fiction, often without intending to do so.  For example, an author might the fictional marriage her story to express an idea about marriage in real life, something she thinks is true about marriage in general.

 

With this in mind, consider some contemporary fiction that addresses the subject of marriage:  Yiyun Li’s “A Flawless Silence,” available at the link below:

 

https://www.newyorker.com/magazine/2018/04/23/a-flawless-silence 

 

Li’s story has joined an ongoing literary conversation about marriage.  Your task is to write an essay in which you evaluate make a case for what point about marriage in general do you think Li uses her fictional marriage to express.  Be sure to support your argument with analysis of evidence from the text, not personal experience or bias.  You may find it useful to conduct research regarding cultural and historical contexts in which the story is set.