essay final help

Essay 1 Draft 1 by Mehmet Arici

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Essay 1 Draft 1 GRADEMARK REPORT

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Instructor

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Sentence Cap. Remember to capitalize the f irst wo rd o f each sentence.

Article Error Yo u may need to use an article bef o re this wo rd.

Article Error Yo u may need to use an article bef o re this wo rd.

Article Error Yo u may need to use an article bef o re this wo rd.

Missing "," Yo u may need to place a co mma af ter this wo rd.

Missing "," Yo u may need to place a co mma af ter this wo rd.

Comment 1

What is wro ng in do ing so (in trying to give them ho pe)? Is this no t what we sho uld be do ing as we try to suppo rt o ur f riends/f amily in times o f dif f iculty and suf f ering? Discuss.

Article Error Yo u may need to remo ve this article.

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Article Error Yo u may need to remo ve this article.

Missing "," Yo u may need to place a co mma af ter this wo rd.

Comment 2

T his is a helpf ul example; use it to develo p yo ur tho ughts o n the ef f ects o f ‘aggressive’ metapho rs (and ho stile language in general) o n o ur thinking and behavio r. Why did yo u f eel remo rsef ul af ter using the wo rd ‘f ighter’ with yo ur ailing f riend? Why was this co ncerning and wo rrying to yo u? Were yo u thinking abo ut ho w it co uld lead to ‘f alse expectatio ns’ o r ho w it might be misleading? Explain this and draw co nnectio ns with the reading.