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Trends & Operation of Management –
Page 3 –Should state title of paper not “introduction”
Page 6 – Where you start listing bullet points – i.e. market place and globalization – the paragraph under should not be indented, just 0.5 indent on first paragraph
Page 8 – “Key Obstacles” should be the header, not “Obstacles during the evolution..
Page 8 – 2nd paragraph, first sentence, citation error
Page 10 – header “Business Operations, no “Walmart” needed
Page 10 – Citation errors
Page 10- Bullet point “Designs of goods and services ,” this is a level two heading, it should be left aligned, Boldface upper and lower case heading
Page 10 – 3rd paragraph, Walmart should be indented
Page 11 – Bullet Point “Quality Management” this is a level two heading, it should be left aligned, Boldface upper and lower case heading
Page 11 – 1st Paragraph under heading “This system was first” should be indented
Page 11 – “I, II, III “ points, use seriation
Page 11 – “Capacity Design” this is a level two heading, it should be left aligned, Boldface upper and lower case heading
Page 12 – indent paragraphs
Page 13 – in bullet point, remove the periods, 2nd bullet point change word to Resources
Page 13- “Production”, “Quality”, “Resources”, these are a level two heading, it should be left aligned, Boldface upper and lower case heading
Page 13 – 2nd paragraph, citation incorrect
Page 14 – “Information Management” - this is a level two heading, it should be left aligned, Boldface upper and lower case heading
Page 14 – Removed “on Wal-Mart”, just “Impact
Page 15 – “Information System” this is a level two heading, it should be left aligned, Boldface upper and lower case heading
Reference: All references are listed incorrectly below and need to be fix prior to final submission.
Operationalization
Submission has major errors related to citations, grammar, spelling, syntax, or organization that negatively impact readability and articulation of main ideas
The way you have formatted this paper is a bit wonky. You will want to clean up a bit please.
Life Cycle
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