1. Topic sentence clearly illustrates the purpose of the paper and is used to command the rest of the body sentences.
2. Body sentences discuss main idea of the paragraph. Illustrate good use of details and examples to achieve the descriptive purpose of the assignment.
3. Concluding sentence is relevant to show review of the main idea as expressed and signals completion of the paragraph.
4. Varied sentence structure and simple/complex sentences handled correctly. Demonstrates use of the steps of the writing process. Effective use of transitions noted.