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ECON201.docx by Boya Liu

Submission date: 14-Nov-2018 04:03PM (UTC-0800) Submission ID: 1039211785 File name: ECON201.docx Word count: 871 Character count: 4491

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Overall the paper is in good shape though additional work is needed. You have identified the main contributing factors, but the economic mechanism of the factors that you mentioned is not explained in enough details and clarity. The issue should be related to S-D and externalities more closely. In addition, the effect of oil extraction tax is not well predicted. Changes in Q and P affect each other.

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Comment 1

It 's actually about Calif ornia having higher gas price than other states. The gas prices are not always rising in Calif ornia, but even when gas prices were f alling nation-wide, the gas price change in Calif ornia was not at par with other states.

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Prices

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Provide some details why this is so.

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The article is about gas prices, not energy costs in general. You should make it explicit how

these policies af f ect gas prices and the underlying economic mechanisms.

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Comment 12

Move this to the previous paragraph as it is an explanation on why the changes mentioned in the previous paragraph increased gas prices.

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How does this change af f ect gas prices?

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Will change in supply of gas af f ect its price?

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Text Comment. Overall the paper is in good shape though additional work is needed. You have identif ied the main contributing f actors, but the economic mechanism of the f actors that you mentioned is not explained in enough details and clarity. The issue should be related to S-D and externalit ies more closely. In addition, the ef f ect of oil extraction tax is not well predicted. Changes in Q and P af f ect each other.

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