compare and contrast
English 1302
Essay 1: Theme
[OVERVIEW] We have discussed the significance of theme (See pp 381-386 and 703), the central or dominant idea, in works of short fiction and poetry. In your first essay, you will compare and contrast the themes of two works assigned in the first two weeks of the course. This assignment is intentionally open ended subject-wise, though you should maintain the following criteria:
· Establish a dominant, controlling idea (thesis statement) in the opening paragraph that details how you believe each theme compares and/or contrast. Your choice of works, the elements of theme you highlight, and what you hope to prove in your comparison/contrast (the “So What?”), which should be thoughtful and risk-taking.
· Your thesis statement should articulate your controlling idea AND demonstrate the organization of the essay.
· Use quotes from each text to strengthen your claims. Keep in mind that the text is your BEST (if not only) source of evidence. You should use it carefully and often. Assume your audience has read these texts. You should NOT simply summarize the works (doing so will not merit a passing grade). You need to rhetorically select what scenes/events to pull out of the text to prove your point.
· Remember that according to MLA guidelines in-text citations with page numbers should follow your quotes. Visit the Purdue OWL website for formatting MLA requirements.
· In the Introduction, remember to provide the authors’ names, the titles (short stories in quotations), and some sort of timeframe, such as publication date, writing date, or period of setting.
· Provide a Works Cited page at the end of the paper.
[A HELPFUL REMINDER] It is important to remember that the theme of a story is not plot summary; it conveys the values and ideas expressed by the story about the world outside the text. Simply conveying story plots will not result in a passing grade for this assignment.
Also, keep in mind that titles, settings, symbols, conflicts, and character statements can all reveal the theme of a story and help you prove your point.
[FORMATTING AND DEADLINES] This first essay should be at least three pages in length, double-spaced, typed, and in 12pt Ariel or Times New Roman font. (That means you may want one or two lines on page 4.) Also, you should follow MLA guidelines for quoting sources and formatting the paper.
First Drafts: Bring two hard copies to class ______ (date) for peer review. If you find yourself struggling, please visit me during my office hours, by phone, or we can schedule a time that suits both of us. When arriving for our meeting, make sure you have two or three specific questions about your paper.
Final Drafts: All papers are due in Blackboard on the scheduled date of Week 4 (please see the class schedule online) and will not be accepted late, unless arrangements are made with the instructor prior to the due date.
This paper meets the follow Course Objectives:
· To develop ideas and synthesize primary and secondary sources within focused academic arguments.
· To analyze, interpret, and evaluate, a variety of texts for the ethical and logical uses of evidence
· To write in a style that clearly communicates meaning, builds credibility, and inspires belief or action by following standard essay composition procedures; applying logical organization and support; and by using effective rhetorical strategies appropriate to defined audience and purpose.
· To be able to make and provide evidence for complex arguments
· To apply the conventions of style manuals for specific academic disciplines (MLA).
· To demonstrate revision in response to self-criticism and feedback from instructors and peers
· To mast conventions of argumentative academic writing that requires research
Grading Criteria for Theme Essay Student Name: _____________________________
Paper is properly titled. It is both interesting and informative about the paper’s topic.
Excellent Good Average Needs some work Needs a lot of work
The paper demonstrates a careful consideration and pairing of themes from two texts. The thesis statement demonstrates an argument concerning the two texts. Titles, authors, and dates appear within the Introduction.
Excellent Good Average Needs some work Needs a lot of work
The writer analyzes each text effectively, including the texts (as quotations, paraphrase, and summary) in the essay for support / evidence.
Excellent Good Average Needs some work Needs a lot of work
The writer effectively inserts quotes by setting the context, attributing the source, explaining the significance (in a follow-up sentence), and providing a citation for the quotation. (In some case, the attribution can be implied.)
Excellent Good Average Needs some work Needs a lot of work
The paper does not rely heavily on summary or plot-based arguments and meets all other criteria for this assignment.
Excellent Good Average Needs some work Needs a lot of work
The paper is logically organized and focused. Conclusion leaves reader with a sense of closure.
Excellent Good Average Needs some work Needs a lot of work
Sentences are clear, varied, and relatively error-free, and comma, colon, and semi-colon usages are correct.
Excellent Good Average Needs some work Needs a lot of work
Professionalism: During the Theme Unit, the student has acted in a professional manner. Student has attended each class (on time), has read all required works, has participated in classroom discussions (with respect to others in the class) and peer review sessions, has followed all rules set by the instructor, and has taken every advantage provided him/her to deliver to the instructor a thoroughly revised and edited 3-4 page theme comparative analysis. In other words, student’s work conveys to the instructor that he/she has taken the assignment seriously. Student’s participation in class peer reviews shows evidence of in-depth thought about his/her peer’s paper.
Excellent Good Needs some work Needs lots of work
Notable issues or comments: Portfolio Grade: ______________________
Paper One Writing Challenge Worksheet Name: _____________________________
Please print and submit with your final paper.
Which two works are you analyzing? And do you analyze them in the order you’ve listed them here and in your introduction? _______________________________________________________________________________________
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Please describe the common theme you see in both works. What “big-picture point” (So What?) about your theme you (or your writer) wants readers to come away with? (Hint: I might help to use end by completing this phrase: “ . . . in order to . . .”
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During this unit, you’re challenged to do the following in your paper: use a quote, a paraphrase, and a summary. Please copy and paste below an example of each.
Quote (with in-text citation in MLA):
Paraphrase (with in-text citation in MLA)
Summary
List your peer review partners here: ____________________________________________________________
Take one last look over your paper, making sure you analyzed your chosen texts rather than summarizing. Remember, summarizing leaves your reader responsible for making connections to critical arguments. Check here that you have reviewed your work and believe it’s argumentative rather than informative. ____