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MY LOVE

Every time I look into your eyes(a)

I am reminded of my favorite, the red dye(a)

I remember how many nights we spent(b)

In the hills that little bent(b)

I this dark era where everything seems uncertain(c)

You are my confidence as I close the curtains(c)

Our love will remain faithful till the end of times(d)

Because you are the only one I dream of every time(d)

I will live to cherish every moment(e)

For being with you makes me Guerrant(e)

That day at the stores, I could feel your heartbeat(f)

For my heart only beats for you babe(g)

If I had to choose all over again for a life partner(h)

I would still love it to be your gardener(h)

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The above sonnet depicts deep emotions between lovers, and the male partner is the

speaker. He communicates with deep feelings to the woman he loves and promises to be with her

until the end of time. The first two lines of the sonnet as "Every time I look into your eyes,

I am reminded of my favorite, the red dye." They depict the intensity of love that the male

speaker feels for the woman of his dreams. When we read between the lines, we realize that the

sonnet is all about love in the air, even as the sonnet's title suggests.

The woman is being reminded that even if the guy had to choose once more, she could still be

the perfect choice for him, for she is the only one that his heart beats for.

As illustrated in each line above, the sonnet has regular rhymes, for the syllables have rhyming

sounds and are showcased as follows; aa, bb, cc, dd, ee,f, g, hh.