Redo Class 2 Assessments 2,3,4

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Class2AssignmentRedoInterview-RubicandTeachercomments.docx

This is the comment for Assignment 2 Interview. This paper got me a 76%, I need an A. Please follow the below rubric and read teacher comments to improve paper. I also attached instructions and example.

1. Summarizes an interview focused on past or current issues at a health care organization. Notes strategies employed in the interview to ensure that sufficient information was gathered.

Teacher Comment: This section was a bit unclear. I did not find a full summary of the interview that that gave a complete discussion of strategies, supported by citations in the literature.

This is needed for a higher performance score. What does the literature say? What is the relationship of best practice actions to the identified problem? Use citations, explain & give examples to score highest

What interview technique did you use?

2. Identifies an issue from an interview for which an evidence-based interdisciplinary approach would be appropriate, providing one or more specific reasons to justify this approach.

Teacher Comment: Nice identification of the issue of medical error rate. For a higher performance score, are there author’s you might be able to cite, who could provide support for this approach? This would increase clarity of this criterion.

To score highest use citations, explain & give examples to score highest

3. Describes potential change theories and a leadership strategies that could help develop an interdisciplinary solution to an organizational issue. Notes which sources seem most credible or relevant to the specific organizational issue.

Teacher Comments: I like that you described both the change theory of improve communication ( need to say how to get this done) and the leadership strategy of situational or contingency style to develop your interdisciplinary solution to this organizational issue. Very nice citation of sources to support this issue. This brought increased credibility to your writing.

4. Describes collaborative approaches from the literature that could be relevant in establishing or improving an interdisciplinary team to address an organizational issue. Notes which sources seem most credible or relevant to the specific organizational issue.

Teacher Comment: nice discussion of improved communication _as a collaborative approach to this organizational issue. For a distinguished score, citation of authors who could provide support for this approach is needed. What does the literature say?

This section is succinct but lacks content. What else can the team do or implement to be cohesive?

5. Organizes content with a clear purpose. Content flows logically with smooth transitions using coherent paragraphs, correct grammar/punctuation, word choice, and free of spelling errors.

Teacher Comment: I like that your writing was clear and logical. There were some errors in APA format and grammar. I hope you will use Academic writer website: https://academicwriter-apa-org.library.capella.edu/ to help you with this. You have the potential to be an excellent writer.

see attached paper

6. Exhibits strict and flawless adherence to APA formatting of headings, in-text citations, and references. Quotes and paraphrases correctly.

Teacher Comment: 2 of 3 were good see corrections on attached paper

I like that your writing was clear and logical. There were some errors in APA format and grammar. I hope you will use Academic writer website: https://academicwriter-apa-org.library.capella.edu/ to help you with this. You have the potential to be an excellent writer.