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Yo ur submissio n did no t analyze the target audience o f the selected co mmunicatio n. Hence; that Critical Element (per assignment rubric) was no t met. Po ints f o r o verall ef f o rt

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Highly impro per - f irst name sho uld no t be used. Please see the APA Manual f o r pro per f o rmats

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Go o d ef f o rt – But, while yo u determined the impo rtance o f the intended message f o r the target audience, narrative lacks detail that may impact accuracy o f determinatio n.

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Highly impro per - f irst name sho uld no t be used. Please see the APA Manual f o r pro per f o rmats

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Go o d ef f o rt; but while yo u made ef f o rt at assessing the extent to which existing co mmunicatio n was successf ul in delivering the intended message, with explanatio n as to the

reaso ning; the assessment and explanatio n lacks necessary detail.

Comment 8

Pe r cle arly st at e d dire ct ive s, part 2 of t his assignme nt was suppose d t o be submit t e d se parat e ly!

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Per this written repo rt co ntents, yo u did no t adapt the co mmunicatio n artif act to better meet the needs o f target audience. Hence; that Critical Element (per assignment rubric) was no t met. Po ints f o r o verall ef f o rt

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Go o d ef f o rt; but, per written repo rt co ntents, while yo u articulated the pro cess behind the adaptatio n and ho w the guidelines were applied, there are gaps in detail, clarity, o r accuracy.

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REPEAT Erro r! Impro per – FULL f irst names are no t permitted in ref erence items by APA. Please see the APA Manual f o r pro per f o rmats

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Comment 12

REPEAT Erro r! Impro per – FULL f irst names are no t permitted in ref erence items by APA. Please see the APA Manual f o r pro per f o rmats

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REPEAT Erro r! Impro per – FULL f irst names are no t permitted in ref erence items by APA. Please see the APA Manual f o r pro per f o rmats