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Essentials of business communication
8th Canadian Edition
Mary Ellen Guffey/Dana Loewy/
Richard Almonte
Chapter 6
Persuasive Writing Situations
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Learning Objectives
1. Understand why the indirect strategy is used to persuade and how the strategy works.
2. Request favours and other actions persuasively.
3. Write persuasive claim request messages.
4. Present persuasive new ideas within organizations.
5. Analyze techniques used in persuasive sales and promotional messages.
6. Compose various persuasive electronic sales and promotional messages.
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Using the Indirect Writing Strategy in Persuasive Writing Situations
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Use the indirect strategy when you know you will encounter resistance.
It requires more practice and experience than the direct strategy.
Components of an Indirect Persuasive Request
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Writing Plan:
Gain attention in the opening.
Build interest in the body.
Reduce resistance in the body.
Motivate action in the closing.
Ask students why persuasion is such an important factor.
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Persuasive Favour Request
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Discuss the differences in the “Before” and “After” documents.
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Persuasive Situation: Making Complex Claims and Complaints
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Writing Plan:
Gain attention in the opening by paying the receiver a compliment.
Build interest in the body by explaining and justifying the complaint with convincing reasons and without anger.
Reduce resistance in the body by subtlety suggesting the responsibility of the receiver. Appeal to sense of fairness or desire for customer satisfaction.
Motivate action in the closing by explaining exactly what action you want taken and when.
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Complex Indirect Claim
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Persuasive Situation: Sales and Promotional Messages
Writing Plan: AIDA
Opening (gain Attention. Offer something valuable; promise a benefit to the reader.)
Body (build Interest. Describe central selling points and make rational and emotional appeals; elicit Desire in the reader and reduce resistance.)
Closing (motivate Action. Offer a gift, promise an incentive, limit the offer, set a deadline, or guarantee satisfaction.)
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The AIDA Pattern
Attention
Opener should be short.
Begin with something to catch the reader’s attention:
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| Offer | Fact |
| Benefit | Produce feature |
| Open-ended suggestive question | Testimonial |
| Quotation Compliment | Startling statement |
| Compliment | Personalized action setting |
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The AIDA Pattern
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Interest
Describe product/service with appeals:
| Rational Appeal | Saving money or increasing efficiency |
| Emotional Appeal | Status, ego, sensual feelings |
| Dual Appeal | A combination of both rational and emotional appeal |
The AIDA Pattern
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Desire
Elicit desire in the reader and overcome resistance.
Anticipate objections.
Focus on reader benefits:
| Provide testimonials | Offer free trial/sample |
| Use names of satisfied users (with permission) | Mention performance tests, polls or awards |
| Offer a guarantee or warranty |
The AIDA Pattern
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Action
Make it easy for the reader to respond.
Consider incentives to encourage action:
| Offer a gift/incentive |
| Set a deadline/limit the offer |
| Guarantee satisfaction |
The final paragraph of the sales letter carries the call to action.
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Direct-Mail Sales Letter Using AIDA
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Ask students why it is important to understand the differences between direct and indirect sales messages.
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Persuasive Situation: Online Sales and Promotional Messages
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Much like traditional direct mail, digital marketing can attract new customers, keep existing ones, encourage future sales, cross-sell, and cut costs.
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Persuasive Situation: Online Sales and Promotional Messages
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Selling by e-mail:
Craft a catchy subject line.
Keep the main information “above the fold.”
Keep the message short, conversational, and focused.
Convey urgency.
Sprinkle testimonials throughout the copy.
Provide a means for opting out.
Using Other New Media to Connect With Customers
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Blogs
Wikis
RSS
Podcasting
Other social media (Twitter)
Ask students to give examples of when each of the other new media ideas would be appropriate for a company to use in the context of persuasive writing.
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Summary
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The ability to persuade is a powerful versatile communication tool.
Apply the indirect strategy when writing claim letters, favour requests, persuasive suggestions within organizations, and sales letters.