Revised Draft

however, there are some corrections needing to be made, such as including new Articles for  #5 and #17 of AB in paper (see earlier e-mail): it is necessary to use the EOP and APA Manual 7th edition to complete work”. Download a copy of the EOP Manuel form Syllabus if necessary.

Correct TITLE PAGE and make consistent with EOP, need a Copyright page-Appendix 2, use appropriate running head on pages, Need Abstract TITLE page Appendix 5, correct writing errors in ABSTRACT and such throughout entire document, correct TABLE OF CONTENT to format of Appendix 6 EOP; then, reflect appropriate changes/corrections/integration of TABLE OF CONTENT throughout the LITSERATURE REVIEW SECTION and entire document, as well as use appropriate MAJOR and Subheadings. Use only the 24 evidence-based references approved for AB (see Assignment Instructions).

Read over comments, and make corrections and additions, as appropriate throughout document. Present an Integrated paper with sections, such as in the revised TABLE OF CONTENT Appendix 6 (see Sample of Table of Content in EOP-APPENDIX 6). Take time and correct errors related to grammar and other English composition principles of such (extremely necessary). Go through the entire paper and correct these types of errors, see the types highlighted in paper.

Look at "each comment" throughout the entire paper, and make the appropriate changes, corrections, and additions. Again, two such MAJOR correction is to add to the TABLE OF CONTENT (i.e., METHODOLOGY and RESULTS SECTIONS and appropriate Subsection for each of them-use format of APPENDIX 6), and add appropriate Subsections/elements in appropriate First and Second Level Heads, respectively throughout TABLE OF CONTENT and LITERATURE REVIEW SECTIONS; do not add Subsections under the INTRODUCTION in TABLE OF CONTENT and remove ABSTRACT from it as well (see example in APPENDIX 6 of EOP). You have 30 pages of content, and need appropriate MAJOR and Subsection throughout paper as revised in Table Of Content. Begin INTRODUCTION as page 1. Need 30 – 40 pages of content, beginning with the INTRODUCTION page after all corrections are made and integration of work. After all Articles are approved (24 sources), they need to reflect the APUS DOI. There must be 24 references accepted for AB in APA format as required (see earlier e-mails). Painstaking edit work and pay attention to necessary corrections needed.

Use EOP and APA as appropriate; it is important that you use EOP and APA to make corrections. Look in EOP and Chapter 8, 9, 10, 11 of APA 7h edition (citations and references), and use them as guide when necessary; then, in your LITERASTURE REVIEW SECTION, add the appropriate MAJOR and Subsection from TABLE OF CONTENT (Revised). Integrate all evidence-based Articles information after revisions