OVERALL COMMENTS
…….the project has been reviewed. It will be necessary to clearly state the business issue, provide business analyses and then recommendations that directly address/respond to it. You have a lot of interesting content in this project but it reads a bit like a term paper . It needs to demonstrate business knowledge (not technology) and solve a business issue. I think if you remove much of the general commentary in this work and refocus it on the business issue, look through a business lens with the analysis, you can adjust this so that it will meet the criteria for a business capstone. Please update and HIGHLIGHT changes when you resubmit and let me know if you have questions.