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but how do consumers know about Wool+Aid? Do they have advertising?
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so you need to organise this section more clearly. Here is a suggestion: Introduction - definition and explanation of good corporate citizenship. Answer to question Paragraph 1 - Thesis - Wool+Aid is a good corporate citizen because it protects the environment by not polluting. .. Paragraph 2- Topic sentence - Wool+Aid is a good corporate citizen because it protects the environment by being sustainable. Paragraph 3 - other aspects of being a good corporate citizen - maybe cannot assess yet because the company is just new???
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Saleh Mohammed Kutabish, Ana Maria Soares. "chapter 9 The Role of Social
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Commerce Components on the Consumer Decision-Making Process", IGI Global, 2020 Publication
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5/0 woolaid.edited.docx GRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
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PAGE 1
Run-on This sentence may be a run-on sentence.
Comment 1
I don't think this sentence is necessary. Your lecturer knows Wool+Aid
Prep. You may be using the wrong preposition.
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Article Error You may need to use an article before this word.
Text Comment. but how do consumers know about Wool+Aid? Do they have advertising? Sponsorships? etc?
Prep. You may be using the wrong preposition.
Article Error You may need to remove this article.
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great
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Comment 3
maybe start with the claim - does Wool+Aid help consumers here ? and then explain how?
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new paragraph
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Text Comment. this paragraph is too long
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What is this?
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Maybe add
Based on these principles Wool+Aid can be considered a good corporate citizen
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into
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and never disappear
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this is very repetitive - can you organize the ideas that are similar together?
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repetitive
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Sp. This word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proofread your work.
Text Comment. so you need to organise this section more clearly. Here is a suggestion: Introduction - definition and explanation of good corporate citizenship. Answer to question Paragraph 1 - Thesis - Wool+Aid is a good corporate citizen because it protects the environment by not polluting. .. Paragraph 2- Topic sentence - Wool+Aid is a good corporate citizen because it protects the environment by being sustainable. Paragraph 3 - other aspects of being a good corporate citizen - maybe cannot assess yet because the company is just new???
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