health budgeting

Jeffrow004
attempt2score.docx

Attempt 2 has been evaluated

OVERALL COMMENTS

Jeffrey, this submission appears to provide very little analysis of St. Anthony's financial position, etc. and is very difficult to connect much of your discussion with the required criterion. Most of the discussion is general discussion, and does not appear to be specific to St. Anthony's. While you added some discussion (on page 3) I'm not clear what it has to do with St. Anthony's, since you appear to be discussing "Saint Francis". Some of the errors previously noted were still not corrected. For the 3rd and final attempt, I would strongly encourage you to use the Template tht is provided in the Announcement. Dr. Baker

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COMPETENCY 1

Explain the importance of reporting in health care.

CRITERION

Explain the financial position of St. Anthony Medical Center by comparing assets and liabilities.

Your result: Proficient

Distinguished

Analyzes the financial position of St. Anthony Medical Center by comparing assets and liabilities, includes recommendations to improve the financial forecast, and cites professional literature for the recommendations.

Proficient

Explains the financial position of St. Anthony Medical Center by comparing assets and liabilities.

Basic

Describes the assets and liabilities of St. Anthony Medical Center but does not explain the financial position of the organization.

Non-Performance

Does not describe the assets and liabilities of St. Anthony Medical Center.

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CRITERION

Explain the financial position of St. Anthony Medical Center compared to previous years.

Your result: Proficient

Distinguished

Analyzes the financial position of St. Anthony Medical Center compared to previous years, includes recommendations for improvements, and cites professional literature for the recommendations.

Proficient

Explains the financial position of St. Anthony Medical Center compared to previous years.

Basic

Describes the financial position of St. Anthony Medical Center but does not compare to previous years.

Non-Performance

Does not describe the financial position of St. Anthony Medical Center.

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CRITERION

Explain how accounts receivable changed from previous years.

Your result: Proficient

Distinguished

Analyzes how the accounts receivable changed from previous years and the impact on cash flow, includes recommendations to reduce receivables, and cites professional literature that supports the recommendations.

Proficient

Explains how accounts receivable changed from previous years.

Basic

Describes the accounts receivable, but does not compare to previous years.

Non-Performance

Does not describe the accounts receivable.

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COMPETENCY 2

Develop a departmental budget.

CRITERION

Analyze the financial obligations of St. Anthony Medical Center and their implications for the upcoming year.

Your result: Proficient

Distinguished

Analyzes the financial obligations of St. Anthony Medical Center and their implications for the upcoming year, makes recommendations, and cites professional literature that supports the recommendations.

Proficient

Analyzes the financial obligations of St. Anthony Medical Center and their implications for the upcoming year.

Basic

Lists the financial obligations of St. Anthony Medical Center, but does not analyze the implications for the upcoming year.

Non-Performance

Does not list the financial obligations of St. Anthony Medical Center.

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CRITERION

Analyze patient revenue compared to previous years and the implications for the financial health of St. Anthony Medical Center.

Your result: Proficient

Distinguished

Analyzes patient revenue compared to previous years and the implications for the financial health of St. Anthony Medical Center, provides recommendations, and cites professional literature that supports the recommendations.

Proficient

Analyzes patient revenue compared to previous years and the implications for the financial health of St. Anthony Medical Center.

Basic

Analyzes patient revenue compared to previous years but does not discuss the implications for the financial health of St. Anthony Medical Center.

Non-Performance

Does not analyze patient revenue compared to previous years.

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COMPETENCY 3

Communicate in a manner that is scholarly, professional, and respectful of the diversity, dignity, and integrity of others and consistent with the expectations for health care professionals.

CRITERION

Adhere to the rules of grammar, usage, and mechanics.

Your result: Basic

Distinguished

Exhibits strict and nearly flawless adherence to the rules of grammar, usage, and mechanics.

Proficient

Adheres to the rules of grammar, usage, and mechanics.

Basic

Errors in grammar, usage, and mechanics inhibit readability and comprehension and detract from good scholarship.

Non-Performance

Does not adhere to the rules of grammar, usage, and mechanics.

Faculty Comments:

Although the grammar, punctuation, spelling errors appear to have been corrected; the "mechanics" (the overall flow) is confusing and difficult to follow and connect the discussion with the required Criterion.

CRITERION

Apply APA formatting to in-text citations and references.

Your result: Non-Performance

Distinguished

Exhibits strict and nearly flawless adherence to APA formatting of in-text citations and references.

Proficient

Applies APA formatting to in-text citations and references.

Basic

Applies APA formatting to in-text citations and references incorrectly and/or inconsistently, detracting noticeably from good scholarship.

Non-Performance

Does not apply APA formatting to in-text citations and references.

Faculty Comments:

As noted previously all references must be cited in the text and all in-text citations must be on the Reference Page. All in-text citations must be listed on the Reference Page. Headers are not used in APA 7; there are multiple blank pages (9-11)