Assignment Paper

Sashraf
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Good discussion of sovereignty but you needed to name and focus in on specific rules/laws that govern it. Excellent explanation of why a state would want to collect intelligence, why it might be required ethically, and whether cyber operations that collect detailed intelligence on another state violate its sovereignty. Good discussion on territorial jurisdiction and mention of the computer crimes act but you needed to go into more detail again other laws/rules, and more fully describe the CCA.   Good discussion on whether cyber operations that collect detailed intelligence on another state may exercise jurisdiction over this data but you needed to specifically focus in on data that traverses its territory. Good number and quality of your references. Good work on the mechanics of your paper. It is well-written and clear. Thanks for reviewing my feedback Muhammad. I hope it was helpful. If you have any questions or concerns, please let me know.