Assignment 3and4

Criteria

Excellent

Comments

DELIVERY

Assignment & Look

· Kept to the spirit of the low-tech day digital fast as evident in the narrative

· Seen as a coherent series of paragraphs

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WRITING

Discussion post

· Brought the reader easily into work

· The experience unfolded for the reader to explain the digital fast and the reader could appreciate the author's experience

· The author's reflection of the experience is articulated in the work

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Paragraphs (¶), Topic sentences, & Flow

· Organized paragraphs in a logical order (NOT the order of the questions)

· Helpful transitions between ideas

· Each ¶ is clearly defined and focuses on a single coherent concept; not too big

· Topic sentences define and focus each ¶

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AUDIENCE, POV, GRAMMAR

Audience & Tone

· Established audience and wrote according to their knowledge & background

· Used appropriate POV

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Grammar

· Fabulous grammar & punctuation

· Few errors

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