Research Assignment 2: Revise proposal topic

MASY Research Process and Methods MASY GC-1260

Grading Rubric

Faculty: Andres Fortino Section: 100

Assignment: 1B Date: 9/18/20

Student: Chen Chen

Grade Points Possible Comments

Length A 2 2 Doc Type A 2 2 Template B 1 2 Please use the template provided Line Spacing A 1 1 Grammar C 3 5 Please use grammarly Sentences No bullets or outline, whole sentences A 1 1 English Usage A 1 1 Plagiarism A 5 5 Voice Active voice A 1 1

Problem A 5 5 Research question A 5 5 Excellent - needs a littlke rewording Context A 5 5 KPI and Gap A 5 5

Total 37 40 Late?

Grammarly Score 52 Plagiarism Score 5% acceptable No acceptable Yes

Word document only (.docx)

Proposed revision of the research question: Good question. Let me propose you change it make it emasurable: "Which information security techniques are most effective for healthcare facilities to adopt to ensure security of Covid19 electronic health records?" You see? It will be measurable and will provide a testable hypothesis.

Form Criteria

Identified Appropriate Identified

Indetified

2-4 pages

Used Template Double spacing Proper grammar (more than 85 on Grmmarly)

Good use of the English language

Contents

Grammarly plagiarism score less than 15%