Business Management Dissertation

Feedback from Lee Smith-Dennis

25/03/20 19:41

You have produced a reasonable rationale for conducting the study, but must be clearer with your research questions as two are very similar. Your literature review is reasonable, but includes some very dated references which are now irrelevant.

Your methodology could be more detailed as you must explain why you are choosing the methods that you are.

Your potential outcomes are reasonably clear. Overall, a reasonable attempt but failing to show a current research gap.



Feedback from Ali Rasel

27/03/20 14:14

The proposal shows a good study background with a clear aim and objectives. The rationale and significance of the study are not clear. You need to use a specific theory to understand the subject matter. The review seems to be done on mobile banking in general. It should include ideas about security issues with mobile banking. The review needs to be more critical. Research methodology needs to be connected to the research questions. You need to show the number of studies you are going to systematically review. If Meta-analysis is the main method to answer the research questions, you need to review studies on the same topic and show how you are going to do Meta-analysis with an appropriate analysis tool. Potential outcomes need to be explained with good evidence of analysis. The writing structure is fine but you need to improve your English with good grammar and academic writing. Referencing follows the Harvard style despite a few journal references have been used in the proposal.