Study skills and research methods
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Great and informative introduction to your chosen research topic. Do be careful with some of your sentence structures and some are slightly clumsy and make the statements confusing. Carry out a detailed proofread before submitting and this should identify many of these instances
Good aim and objectives
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Try to add a sentence or two which indicates the literature gap in which your research is contributing to
Dissertation projects are typically allocated 12 weeks to undertake - however great use of initiative in using the semester duration.
Detailed and timely work plan - well done!
FINAL GRADE
75/100 Naphatsaminh Sirichai P2561286 GRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor Very well presented assignment, with great detail given to how the relevant information is presented, well done. A very interesting topic choice and research proposal. You have given brilliant detail behind the topic and the methods proposed for your research. Be mindful of some of your statements as at times these are confusing due to clumsy sentence structure. Some suggestions have been made on the assignment to show you what is meant by this. Overall an very thoughtful and well executed assignment.
Introduction (Distinction standard): The assignment demonstrates excellent knowledge and understanding of the topic.Aim & Objectives (Merit standard): Aim and objectives are good and reported in a clear structure.
Lit Review (Merit standard): The literature review provides a good analysis of the research context with some evidence of relevant wider reading (beyond the three suggested papers) and critical analysis. The work is well developed and show some originality. Clear evidence of capacity to reflect critically.
Methodology (Distinction standard): The description of the methodology demonstrates depth of understanding of conceptual, theoretical and methodological issues. There is a good identification and discussion of any ethical issues related to the work and their related risks.
Work plan (Distinction standard): Excellent time management and planning of the work.
Style (Merit standard): The writing is clear, demonstrating a good grasp of academic English. The argumentation is logical and well structured, and shows evidence that source literature has been read and assimilated, and has been critically applied.
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slightly clumsy sentence structure
...has developed exponentially each year creating more applications than has been previously possible [1]
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assisting
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grabbing and holding
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Despite these advantages, the Co-bot still has limits and risks involved which need to be taken into consideration
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clumsy phrasing of this
Text Comment. Great and informative introduction to your chosen research topic. Do be careful with some of your sentence structures and some are slightly clumsy and make the statements confusing. Carry out a detailed proofread before submitting and this should identify many of these instances
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Text Comment. Good aim and objectives
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how will you do this - add a bit more detail to this objective
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simply by saying two methods
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does not need to be capitalised
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Text Comment. Try to add a sentence or two which indicates the literature gap in which your research is contributing to
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Text Comment. Dissertation projects are typically allocated 12 weeks to undertake - however great use of initiative in using the semester duration.
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Text Comment. Detailed and timely work plan - well done!
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