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The Reading Matrix Vol. 8, No. 1, April 2008

BRADDOCK REVISITED: THE FREQUENCY AND PLACEMENT OF TOPIC SENTENCES IN ACADEMIC WRITING

Craig G. Smith craigrace@handong.edu

Abstract _____________________ It has been more than thirty years since Richard Braddock published the notable article in which he examined the manner that professional writers utilize topic sentences. He found in his corpus that expository paragraphs seldom began with topic sentences. Consequently, Braddock (1974) admonished teachers to stop instructing their students that most professional writers begin their paragraphs with topic sentences. The purpose of this study is to replicate Braddock’s study using a corpus made up of articles selected from a particular area of written discourse, American history. Braddock’s model, with a few exceptions, is used in the evaluation of this material. Braddock’s conclusion, that only 13% of expository paragraphs begin with a topic sentence, has been widely cited to support the notion that teachers need to reassess the manner in which they teach reading and writing skills. Results of this study indicate that, in this corpus, a major topic sentence is at the initial position of the respective discourse block unit in approximately two- thirds of the cases. Thus, certain conclusions which have been drawn from Braddock’s study need to be re-considered. _____________________ Introduction

The idea that writers begin each paragraph with a topic sentence is an old one. The first

systematic description of paragraph theory was put forward by Alexander Bain in 1866. The

third of Bain’s six rules called for a statement of topic in the initial sentence of the paragraph.

Later scholars noted that the topic sentence could appear in another part of the paragraph or even

be implied (Rogers, 1965). Furthermore, in his notable study, Braddock (1974) found that only

13% of the expository paragraphs in his study began with a topic sentence. Braddock’s study has

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been widely cited to support the view that reading and writing instruction needs to be modified to

account for this fact. For example, as Donlan (1980) noted, most students have been taught that

the topic sentence should be at the beginning of a paragraph. Moreover, he found that most

students expected to find the main idea at the beginning of the paragraph, and when the students

did not find it there, they were unlikely to find the main idea at all. The obvious implication to be

drawn from the reported findings of these studies is that a gap exists between what students are

taught and what actually exists in reality. If students are taught to look for topic sentences at the

beginning of paragraphs, and topic sentences seldom occur there, then it is no surprise that

students might tend to have reading difficulties (and, for that matter, writing difficulties as well).

In a modified replication of Braddock’s study, Baumann and Serra (1984), using a corpus

composed of children’s social studies texts, essentially confirmed Braddock’s findings. Only

27% of paragraphs were found to have begun with an explicit main idea.

In a later study, however, Popken (1987) called into question Braddock’s conclusions. He

pointed out that Braddock’s homogeneous corpus had been widely over-generalized to be

indicative of all types of academic writing. In response, Popken conducted a study, which he

viewed as being corrective to Braddock’s study, on the role of topic sentences in written

discourse. The corpus of his study was divided into seven major discourse disciplines: literature,

history, sociology, psychology, engineering, physics, and biochemistry. He identified the

problem inherent in using the paragraph as the discourse unit to be studied due to its varying

nature. For instance, when short, paragraphs do not always have a topic idea, and the number of

short paragraphs that a particular article contains is determined by the style of the writer. To

summarize Popken’s key point, a topic idea which is introduced in one paragraph can clearly

have influence over the paragraph (or paragraphs) which follow. Results of the Popken study

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indicate that the vast majority of paragraphs (78% across disciplines) are directly influenced by

either a major or minor topic sentence.

The purpose of this study is to determine whether assertions made in response to

Braddock’s study, that the “traditional” topic sentence seldom occurs in professional academic

writing, is indeed the case, or whether Popken’s call for a reassessment of Braddock’s

conclusions is in order.

Methods

This present study is an attempt to replicate Braddock’s (1974) study in which the

analysis and frequency of topic sentences in academic writing was examined. For the most part

Braddock’s methods are used, although some modifications have been made.

Braddock segmented each of his essays into T-units. The term T-unit (Hunt, 1965) was

initially defined as the “minimal terminable unit.” Specifically, Hunt’s T-unit is, “…one main

clause expanded at any of many different points by structure that are modifiers…Short main

clauses may be expanded by incorporating into them…subordinate clauses…” (p. 141).

Braddock slightly modified Hunt’s definition of the T-unit. Consider Braddock’s (1974) example,

broken down into clauses: “The depression destroyed the coalfield’s prosperity, / but the Second

World War revived it, / and for a few years the boom returned / and the miner was again a useful

and honored citizen (p. 290).” Braddock designated clauses three and four to be one T-unit since

the phrase “for a few years” was judged to apply to both clauses. Thus, according to Braddock,

this example is composed of three T-units. In addition, Braddock did not consider subordinate

clauses to be separate T-units. In an attempt to reduce subjectivity, this study defines a T-unit in

the following manner:

(1) Each independent clause is a T-unit. The following example is composed of two T-units.

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The deep snowfall exposed us to constant danger, / and we had to be very careful not to lose our way in the forest.

(2) An adverbial clause is a T-unit. Example two is composed of two T-units.

Although it rained all day, / the football game went on as scheduled.

(3) Relative clauses are not considered to be T-units due to their adjectival nature.

This example is composed of only one T-unit.

I bought the new car which was advertised on TV. (4) Complementary noun clauses which follow reported speech verbs (say, think, imagine,

etc.) are not considered to be separated T-units. The following example is composed of one

T-unit.

Our teacher strongly demanded that there be no whispering during the exam. (5) T-units may be embedded. Example five, which contains a conditional clause, is

composed of two T-units.

The last thing you should do {if you want to stay healthy}is to go outside in this inclement weather. (6) Very short direct quotes which are not complete sentences are not considered to

be T-units. This example contains no T-units.

John! John! Run away! Run away!

Following these guidelines made the process of breaking the text into T-units a reasonably

consistent, non-subjective one.

A second modification of Braddock’s study involved the procedure used to outline

essays in order to identify topic sentences. Braddock read through each section of paragraphs

which seemed to be related, then selected or reconstructed topic sentences. In this study, each

essay is outlined using discourse block analysis. Discourse blocks were identified in the

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following manner: (1) Each essay was carefully read and the thesis statement (controlling idea)

was identified. (2) The essay was carefully re-read and the main points which supported the

thesis idea were identified. Each main point was considered to be the topic idea of a particular

discourse block. (3) In addition to the “main point” discourse blocks, or body blocks, an

introductory and a concluding block were identified for each essay. Thus, in this manner,

discourse blocks were determined, and discourse block topic sentences, sentences within a

particular discourse block which express the main idea of the entire block, were located.

Due to the transient nature of the paragraph, discourse block analysis, rather than merely

determining the topic sentence of each paragraph, was determined to be a more objective way to

analyze the organization of the text. Paragraphs are problematic because they are shaped by the

stylistic preference of their authors. For example, in some cases, paragraphs are longer because

the author includes the main supporting points within one paragraph. In others cases, paragraphs

are shorter because the author chooses to split off the main supporting points into separate

paragraphs. However, each of these two cases represent only on discourse block unit. The point

is that the inherent problem with using the paragraph as a base unit of analysis is that the author’s

style, rather than the written discourse itself, has a direct bearing upon the results of such

analysis.

Procedure

Braddock (1974) selected a corpus consisting of a total of twenty-five essays from The

Atlantic, The New Yorker, The Reporter, and The Saturday Evening Review. This study utilizes a

corpus of twenty-five essays which were randomly selected from The American Heritage and

American History Illustrated. First, sixty relatively recent (1990-1996), short (one to two pages)

and medium-length (three to seven pages) articles were selected, thirty from each magazine. (For

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the sake of time, lengthy articles were bypassed.) Then, twenty five of those articles were

randomly selected. Appendix A summarizes the corpus information used in this study.

After the corpus had been selected and photocopied, each of the twenty-five articles were

divided into T-units. First, the paragraphs in each essay were numbered. Next, T-units were

indicated by using a vertical slash mark (unless embedded). Embedded T-units were set off by

use of brackets. Finally, the number of T-units in each paragraph was tallied and recorded. The

number 3.6 at the beginning of a paragraph would indicate that the third paragraph of an essay

contained six T-units.

After the number of paragraphs and T-units was determined, each essay was carefully

read several times and outlined using discourse block analysis. In the study, only the introductory

discourse block, the concluding discourse block, and a representative discourse block taken from

the body were analyzed. In cases where the thesis statement was located in the body of the essay,

the discourse block in the body which contained the thesis statement was chosen for analysis.

Subsequently, the T-unit(s) which contained the main idea of the discourse block was located.

The following example from American History Illustrated illustrates how this was done.

Introductory Discourse Block:

1.4 The middle of the last century was a remarkable period in U.S. history. / America was a disjunct nation with well-established cities on the eastern seaboard and frontier towns on the Pacific Coast. / Gold had been discovered at Sutter’s Mill near Sacramento, California. / The announcement of this find set the country Wild with excitement, leading to rapid settlement of California by pioneers from every state and territory, as well as adventurers from nations around the globe. / 2.6 Prospectors and merchants made fortunes in gold fields, / and a safe and

expeditious method of transporting travelers and their gold between the East and West coasts was sorely needed. / The Panama Route soon became the preferred crossing. / Every two weeks, side-wheel steamships left New York and San Francisco for the Isthmus of Panama, / where a narrow-gauge railroad linked the Caribbean and Pacific

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ports. / For two decades following the discovery of the precious metal, thousands of passengers, enormous amounts of mail, and tons of gold annually traveled this route / (Herdendorf, 1991).

After T-units were marked and tallied, essays were analyzed using discourse bloc analysis as

follows (see Table One):

_____________Table One_- Discourse Block Analysis Method___________________ DB1 (Intro) Summary of T-units Para 1 Sent 1 T X The mid 1850’s was a remarkable period Sent 2 A X America was disjunct – east/west coast (background info) Sent 3 B X Gold discovered at Sutter’s Mill Sent 4 B1 X This produced rapid settlement Para 2 Sent 1 B2 X Prospectors and merchants get rich Sent 1 B3 X A way of transport needed Sent 2 B3a X Panama route was the ticket Sent 3 B3a1 X Steamships left NY and SF for Panama Sent 3 B3a2 X Railroad crossed Panama (link) Sent 4 B3a3 X For two decades it was the route ________________________________________________________________________ DB1 (Intro) indicates that this is the introductory discourse block of the essay. Para 1 and Para 2

indicate that this discourse block is composed of two paragraphs. The Roman numerals listed

underneath each paragraph identify the sentence in which the T-unit occurs. “T” stands for the

broad topic of the discourse block; it is represented by an “X” in the left-most position. The more

specific the information, the farther to the right the “X” falls. Thus, using this method, topic T-

units of discourse blocks were identified in a consistent manner. Appendix B summarizes the

results of this discourse block analysis.

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Results

Since the introductory, concluding, and a representative body block from each of the

twenty-five essays were analyzed, one would expect to find that a total of seventy-five discourse

block were analyzed in total; however, only seventy-three blocks were analyzed. This is due to

the fact that one of the essays contained neither an introductory nor a concluding block. It was

merely a story told on chronological order. Most noteworthy is the fact that 95% of the discourse

blocks analyzed contained an explicit (non-implied) topic sentence.

When considering all discourse blocks, 66% contained the topic idea at the beginning of

the discourse block. In 18% of the discourse blocks, the topic idea was in the middle of the block,

and 11% of the time, the topic idea occurred at the end of the discourse block. Table Two

displays this data.

____________ Table Two_- Topic Sentence Placement____ _______________

Topic Idea Intro Body Conclusion Total

Beginning 15 20.5 12 47.5 (66%) Middle 5 2.5 6 13.5 (18%) End 3 2 3 8 (11%) Implied 1 0 3 4 (5%)__ 24 25 24 73 (100%)_

Discussion

At first glance, this date appears to be incompatible with Braddock’s results as well as

those of Baumann and Serra. After all, 95% of all discourse blocks analyzed in this study were

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found to contain explicit topic sentences, and 66% of all discourse blocks were found to begin

with explicit topic sentences. Braddock (1974) indicated that only 13% of all paragraphs in his

study opened with topic sentences, and that only 55% of all paragraphs contained explicit topic

sentences. Similarly, Baumann and Serra (1984) found that only 27% of all paragraphs in their

study began with explicit main ideas, and that only 44% of all paragraphs contained explicit

main ideas. However, a closer examination of these two studies is necessary due to the

possibility that the presence of very short paragraphs might tend to skew the results of these

studies.

In his study, Popken (1987) identified the “skewing” nature of very short paragraphs

when examining the relationship between major and minor topic sentences. It was noted that

frequently in two block arrangements, although the second paragraph had no explicit topic

sentence, it clearly fell under the domain of the topic sentence in the preceding paragraph. This

phenomenon would seem to be especially common in cases where paragraphs are very short. In

summation, it was determined that, across the seven discipline examined in Popken’s study, 78%

of all paragraphs were influenced by topic sentences. For the area of history, this was found to be

true 87% of the time. It is noteworthy that Popken’s figure, 87% of paragraphs in history texts

are influenced by topic sentences, corresponds well with this study’s finding that 95% of

discourse block units contain an explicit topic idea.

Braddock (1974) found that 63% of major topic ideas (roughly equivalent to discourse

block topic ideas of this study) were explicit. More revealing are Baddock’s results when

considering only paragraphs of greater than four T-units in length. (It should be noted that

paragraphs composed of five T-units or less are indeed quite short.) For paragraphs in excess of

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four T-units in length, he found that 62% contained explicit topic ideas in the first or second T-

unit of the paragraph, 12% were in the last T-unit, and 26% occurred elsewhere in the paragraph.

A close examination of Baumann and Serra’s (1984) findings yields similar results.

Although only 44% of the paragraphs were found to contain explicit main ideas, it should be

noted that their corpus of children’s social studies texts contained very short paragraphs. In fact,

the mean number of T-units per paragraph was only 4.0. Thus, the Baumann and Serra corpus

would seem to be especially susceptible to the short-paragraph skewing phenomenon. When

considering only the paragraphs that did contain explicit topic sentences, 62% of the main ideas

were found to occur in the first sentence, 13% in the final sentences, and 23% occurred

elsewhere in the paragraph. Table Three presents a comparison of results across studies.

Table Two – Explicit Topic Idea Comparison Across Studies _________ Topic Placement Smith Braddock Baumann & Serra (Discourse Block Units) (Para > 4 T-units) (Paragraphs with TS) ______________________________________________________________________ beginning 69% 62% 62% middle 20% 26% 25% end 11% 12% 13% _______________________________________________________________________ 100% 100% 100%_______

As Table Two clearly indicates, this careful comparison across studies yields similar

results. Explicit topic ideas were found to be located at the beginning of discourse units roughly

two-thirds of the time. At this point, the alert reader may suggest that Table Two is of

questionable value due to the fact that it is being used to compare different entities across studies:

discourse block units, paragraphs composed of more than four T-units, and paragraphs with

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explicit topic sentences. While this may appear to be comparing apples, oranges, and pears, that

is not quite the case. The important point to be drawn from this comparison is quite simple:

regardless of which unit of discourse is used, explicit topic ideas were found to occur in the

initial position approximately two-thirds of the time. The obvious follow-up question is, “How

often are topic sentences/ideas explicit?”

The frequency of explicit topic ideas in paragraphs is dependent upon the stylistic

“whim” of the particular author as he or she decides when and how to begin new paragraphs. As

stated previously, using the paragraph as a base unit of discourse analysis is problematic due to

the fact that the presence of extremely short paragraphs can tend to skew the results because the

short paragraphs frequently do not contain an explicit topic sentence. Nevertheless, they do

usually fall under the domain of the topic sentence of a preceding paragraph. In his study,

Popken (1987) found that, across disciplines, the 78% of the paragraphs in his study were

influenced by topic sentences. It is noteworthy that the mean number of paragraphs influenced

by topic sentences is somewhat lower for the hard sciences (engineering, physics, and

biochemistry – 64%) than that of the humanities (history, literature, and sociology – 88%); yet,

in both cases, the majority of paragraphs were influenced by a topic sentence (p. 220). Thus,

Baumann and Serra’s (1984) finding for their corpus of children’s socials studies texts, that only

44% of paragraphs contained explicit topic ideas, is somewhat misleading because many of those

paragraphs were likely influenced by a topic sentence. Likewise, Braddock’s (1974) report that

only 55% of topic sentences were explicit is misleading for the same reason. The point to be

emphasized is that it would appear that explicit, initial position topic sentences did exert a great

deal of influence upon the essays which composed the corpuses of these studies.

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In brief, Popken’s call for a reassessment of Braddock’s conclusion regarding the topic

sentence is in order. Braddock’s finding, that only 13% of paragraphs in expository academic

writing begin with topic sentences, is misleading. The paragraph, due to its variable nature, is not

an especially suitable unit for discourse analysis. Specifically, the presence of extremely short

paragraphs, which often fall under the domain of a previous topic sentence, tend to skew the

results of paragraph-based discourse data. In other words, the role of topic sentence influence is

not represented in Braddock’s statistic. This can lead the reader to assume that the initial position

topic sentence plays a very minor role in written academic discourse. This fact is significant

because, as Glatthorn (1980) states, “Several studies, most notably Braddock’s 1974 research,

conclude that most paragraphs written by professional writers do not contain [explicit] topic

sentences and very few begin with topic sentences. From this…finding, several so-called experts

of writing leap to the conclusion that we should not teach writers to use topic sentences” (p. 47,

emphasis mine). Additionally, in a 1980 study, Moore and Readence cite Braddock and state,

“…clear topic sentences are rare (Braddock, 1974). In fact, most of then only exist in reading

materials: seldom do they occur in general prose” (p. 589). These are specific examples of the

type of misapplication of Braddock’s study which occur when a particular statistic - only 13% of

paragraphs in expository writing begin with an explicit topic sentence – is taken out of context.

In fact, results from this study, composed of a corpus made up of American history journal

articles, find that 95% of all discourse block units contained an explicit topic idea, and

approximately two-thirds of the time those ideas were at the beginning of the discourse block. In

addition, careful examination of the results of others studies – Braddock (1974), and Baumann

and Serra (1984) – when viewed through the insight provided by Popken (1987), suggest the

same general idea: Although further study is needed, it would appear that the demise of the

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explicit, initial position discourse unit topic sentence has been greatly exaggerated. Rather than

indicating that initial position topic sentences play only a very minor role in written academic

discourse, Braddock’s widely cited study statistic primarily suggests that for the particular

corpus he analyzed, the writer’s tended to frequently use very short paragraphs. In short, we

should take great caution not to over-generalize or misapply the results of Braddock’s study.

Implications

Results of this study suggest that when teaching reading skills, it is appropriate to train

students to look for the main idea of a paragraph at the beginning of a paragraph. Additionally,

they should be taught that the topic sentence might be located at the end of the paragraph when

the author uses inductive rather than deductive logic. Furthermore, a simple way to show how a

topic sentence might occur in the middle of a paragraph is by demonstrating how a topic

sentence readily follows background information which appears at the beginning of the

paragraph. In some instances the main idea is expressed twice in a paragraph. This occurs when

the topic sentence expressed in the opening sentence of the paragraph is fully developed with

main supporting points and examples, often offset by transitions. Then the main idea is restated

in the final sentence of the paragraph, serving as a conclusion of sorts for the paragraph. More

difficult and less often encountered structures, such as implied main ideas and split topic

sentences, can be taught later.

Such conventional wisdom is good as far as it goes; however, it is inadequate in helping

students gain a growing understanding of how the paragraph functions within the greater text as

a whole. How does the student understand a reading which is composed of many short

paragraphs, and selecting the topic sentence of each paragraph is problematic? The role of major

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topic sentences easily can be taught through the use of appropriate examples. This should be

done early in the learning process. Consider the following example.

A lightning strokes sudden release of energy explosively heats the air, producing the compressions we hear as thunder. When heard at a distance of about 100m (330ft) or less from the discharge channel, thunder consists of one loud bang, or “clap.” When heard at a distance of 1km (0.62 mi) from the discharge channel, thunder generally consists of a rumbling sound punctuated by several large claps. In general, thunder cannot be heard at distances of more than 25km (16mi) from the discharge channel. Because lightning strokes generally occur near the storm center, the resultant thunder provides a method of approximating the distance to the storm. Light travels at approximately 300,000 km/s (186,000 mi/sec), and the lightning flash is seen instantaneously. Sound, however, travels at approximately 1/3 km /s (1/5 mi/s), so a time lapse occurs between seeing the lightning flash and hearing the thunder. This phenomenon can also be observed by watching someone at a distance fire a gun or hit a baseball. The report of the gun or the “crack” of the bat is heard after the smoke or flash from the gun is observed Or the baseball is well on its way By counting the second between seeing the light and hearing the thunder (by saying one-thousand one, one-thousand two, etc.), you can estimate your distance from the lightning stroke or the storm. For example, if 5 s is elapsed, then the distance would be approximately 1.k km (1 mi) away…(Johnson, 2001, p. 154).

These three paragraphs are taken from an article about thunderstorms. Clearly, while

individual paragraph analysis has its place, the student will grasp the meaning much more

quickly if he or she can understand that these three paragraphs form a unit (a discourse block)

which focuses on the sound associated with thunder. The first sentence of paragraph one

expresses a general main idea which covers all three paragraphs: lightning produces thunder. The

topic sentence of paragraph two is the first sentence of that paragraph as well. Note that it is

more specific that the first sentence of paragraph one as it discusses the manner in which we can

approximate the distance to the storm based on the sound. Furthermore, paragraph three is even

yet more specific, clearly falling under the domain of the preceding paragraph to the extent that

there is little point in attempting to determine its topic sentence. Examples such as these help

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readers understand the role of topic sentence influence when it extends beyond the paragraph

level.

In conclusion, two points are to be noted. If the goal is to develop skilled readers, then it

is entirely appropriate to teach readers to look for main ideas at the beginning of paragraph since

they are frequently located there. Additionally, it is critical that this instruction be coupled with

helping the students learn to look at paragraphs not merely as isolated entities which follow rigid

standards, but as units which function in relation to the paragraphs which precede and follow

them. In helping students understand the structure and organization of the text, we produce more

skilled readers.

References

Baumann, J. F. & J. K. Serra. (1984). The frequency and placement of main ideas in

children’s social studies textbooks: A modified replication of Braddock’s research

on topic sentences. Journal of Reading Behavior, 16 (1), 27-40.

Braddock, R. (1974). The frequency and placement of topic sentences in expository prose.

Research in the teaching of English, 8, 287-302.

Donlan, D. (1980). Locating main ideas in history textbooks. Journal of Reading, 24 (2),

135-140.

Glatthorn, A. A. (1983). Maintaining momentum: Ensuring that the concern for writing

is not one more educational fad. English Journal, 72 (4), 45-49.

Hunk, H. K. (1965). Grammatical structures written at three grade levels, Research

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Johnson, B. E. (2001). The reading edge: Thirteen ways to build reading comprehension

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& Todd, A. (1992). An introduction to physical science. Boston New York: Houghton

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Professor Smith has thirteen years of university ESL teaching experience. He received his BS

degree from Ohio State University in 1983 and MA TESL degree from Bowling Green State

University in 1997. He has worked at a number of universities in China and South Korea. His

three years in China included one year at Peking University, where he taught graduate students,

professors, and scholars. He is currently directing (as well as teaching in) an English support

program for Handong International Law School in Pohang, South Korea. His interests include

the teaching of writing, teacher training, and testing.

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Appendix A

Summary of Corpus Information

Essay # Author (year)

Magazine # of Para. # of T-units T-units /Para.

1 Weisberger (1996) Amer. Herit. 14 97 6.93 2 Bracken (1996) Amer. Hist. I. 33 143 4.33 3 Ward (1992) Amer. Herit 22 96 4.36 4 Wiener (1991) Amer. Hist. I. 57 306 5.37 5 Smith (1994) Amer. Herit 13 106 8.15 6 Ward (1994) Amer. Herit 12 116 7.00 7 Gordon (1994) Amer. Herit 21 104 4.95 8 Smith (1994) Amer. Herit 13 98 7.54 9 ----- (1992) Amer. Hist. I. 9 39 4.33 10 Kornhauser (1992) Amer. Hist. I. 17 57 3.35 11 Soltysiak (1992) Amer. Hist. I. 59 253 4.29 12 ----- (1992) Amer. Hist. I. 9 31 3.44 13 Davis (1992) Amer. Hist. I. 42 149 3.55 14 Wood (1992) Amer. Hist. I. 67 294 4.39 15 Gordon (1994) Amer. Herit 21 104 4.95 16 Weisberger (1996) Amer. Herit 17 89 5.24 17 Herdendorf (1991) Amer. Hist. I. 51 195 3.82 18 Gustaistis (1991) Amer. Hist. I. 12 69 5.75 19 McGinty (1991) Amer. Hist. I. 52 237 4.56 20 Cory (1991) Amer. Hist. I. 35 286 8.17 21 Lewis (1990) Amer. Hist. I. 18 110 6.11 22 Weisberger (19940 Amer. Herit 16 95 5.94 23 ----- (1994) Amer. Hist. I. 16 65 4.06 24 ----- (1990) Amer. Hist. I. 17 64 3.76 25 Bellico (1990) Amer. Hist. I. 32 122 3.81

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Appendix B

Summary of Discourse Block Analysis (73 Blocks)

Intro Block Body Block Concl Block Total Percent T 23 25 21 69 95% A 24 25 24 73 100% A1 11 11 8 30 A1a 3 4 1 8 A1b 2 3 1 6 A2 7 10 5 22 A2a 1 5 3 9 A21a 0 3 0 3 A21b 0 2 0 2 A3 3 4 2 9 A3a 0 4 0 4 A3b 0 1 0 1

B 19 22 17 58 79% B1 7 7 4 18 B1a 0 2 2 4 B2 2 6 2 10 C 13 1 11 43 59% C1 5 6 5 16 C1a 2 1 1 4 C2 2 4 4 10 C3 2 2 1 5 C4 1 2 0 3 D 10 14 4 28 38% D1 14 8 1 13 D2 3 4 1 8 D3 1 3 1 5 D4 0 2 1 3 E 6 6 3 15 21% E1 2 5 1 8 E2 1 3 1 5 E3 1 1 0 2 F 5 4 2 11 15% F1 4 2 0 6 F2 2 0 0 2 F3 2 0 0 2 G 2 3 0 5 7% H 2 2 0 4 5%