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Argument Paper Rough Draft Grading Criteria

This assignment is due in Week 3.

Content

50 Percent

Points Earned

6/7.5

The paper begins with an introduction paragraph to provide context for the topic. The introduction includes a thesis statement that presents the main claim for the argument, to be elaborated on in the body paragraphs.

Each body paragraph integrates research to provide support for the main idea, and transitions to the next idea.

The paper ends with a conclusion paragraph that summarizes the main ideas of the paper.

The paper represents original work and correctly incorporates quotations and paraphrases from outside sources to inform the writing.

Comments: All of the body paragraphs would benefit from a little more detail from the research. As I said before, the section on the religious strictures against capital punishment is weak—and probably unnecessary.

Organization and Development

30 Percent

Points Earned

4/4.5

The paper is 700 to 1,050 words in length.

The tone aligns with the assignment’s purpose, to include being written in third person, and is geared toward the appropriate audience.

The writing style is academic in nature.

The paper is clear, is organized in a logical manner, addresses the main points, and demonstrates transition from one idea to the next.

The references used for support are scholarly and relevant to the topic.

Comments: The paper is pretty scholarly, but a little light on quotations. The flow is good.

Mechanics and Format

20 Percent

Points Earned

2/3

The proper template is used for the assignment.

Rules of grammar and punctuation are followed; spelling is correct.

Attempts at in-text citations have been added to paraphrases and direct quotes.

Attempts at the correct APA formatting for the title page, reference page, spacing, and font have been made.

References include the correct elements and attempts at correct APA formatting have been made.

Comments: You have no title page and the paragraphs have varying indentations. You need to remove the annotation on your reference page. Some sentences could be smoothed out and you likely should just put those topic sentences into the bodies of the paragraphs which follow.

Additional Comments:

Total Earned

12/15