Hi how you doing my name is albert I need help with this essay this is what I did but my instructor as my to re do it and submit can someone help me ?

ambog2004
Andre_Correction_Exam.pdf

Andre​ ​A.​ ​Mbog   Email ​ ​: ​ ​​albertmbog@gmail.com  

Student​ ​ID​ ​: ​ ​​22617484  Exam ​ ​number​ ​:​​ ​700139  

 

1. Write a composition using one of the topics listed below. Your composition should be three to five paragraphs long. It should contain an                                                introduction, ​ ​a ​ ​body, ​ ​and ​ ​a ​ ​conclusion.  

a. ​ ​Argue ​ ​for ​ ​or ​ ​against ​ ​the ​ ​limitation ​ ​of​ ​speed ​ ​limits.  

b. ​ ​Explain ​ ​why ​ ​a ​ ​certain ​ ​sport ​ ​is ​ ​your ​ ​favorite.  

c. ​ ​Compare ​ ​and ​ ​contrast ​ ​driving ​ ​in ​ ​the ​ ​winter ​ ​and ​ ​driving ​ ​in ​ ​the ​ ​summer.  

d. ​ ​Analyze ​ ​the ​ ​best ​ ​way ​ ​to ​ ​buy ​ ​a ​ ​car, ​ ​mow ​ ​a ​ ​lawn, ​ ​or ​ ​prepare ​ ​a ​ ​meal.  

e. ​ ​Describe ​ ​a ​ ​memorable ​ ​day ​ ​in ​ ​your ​ ​life. ​ ​(I ​ ​choose ​ ​this ​ ​one) 

There are many memorable days I have had in my life; it is difficult to choose just one. My wedding day changed my life, of course. The day                                                        my wife was pregnant it changed my attitude, I was more responsible there is life in life. I pick one that sticks out in my mind as an                                                        important day, I would say my wedding. That day not only changed my life, but those of my family as well as extended family. I think that is                                                        an ​ ​important ​ ​aspect ​ ​of ​ ​memorable ​ ​events ​ ​this ​ ​will ​ ​describe​ ​the ​ ​day ​ ​of ​ ​my ​ ​wedding ​ ​and ​ ​what ​ ​it ​ ​means ​ ​to ​ ​me. 

It was early December and the day was cold and rainy, not at all like the ideal wedding day would be. It was my though, so no skin off my                                                              back, although. The rain went through everything : coats, jackets, even under an umbrella it somehow found a way to get you wet and ruin                                                  your hair. Luckily, there was an awning under which my father and my mother and the wedding party could be dropped off. The church, in                                                  spite of the weather, looked amazing. My wife and I are from pentecostal church, at the same time while giving off a sense of comfortable                                                  grandeur. My wife was gorgeous, friends and families was well dressed even the rain couldn't stop our joy cause we was definitely getting                                              married ​ ​no ​ ​matter ​ ​what ​ ​was ​ ​happening. 

My wife and I had been together for about 4 years before I proposed, so it was no surprise that she said yes. In all honesty, I thought the                                                          marriage wouldn't change much in my life as we already had lived together for 2 years and I already called her my wife. My father and                                                    mother being married for 35 years because the whole feeling of their relationship changed; it was more peaceful and serene. Everyone in                                            the family signed I remembered when we tied the knot. Rocky relationships are obviously not a good thing, but our marriage brought both                                              of our families together. The day that my wife and I were married was incredibly memorable, not only because I can remember my mother                                                crying and my father trying to calm her down, at that time I realized how important family is. Until that rainy day in December, I had had a                                                        big ​ ​family. ​ ​When ​ ​I ​ ​got ​ ​married ​ ​my ​ ​family ​ ​grew ​ ​more ​ ​than ​ ​twice ​ ​over.​ ​Family ​ ​is ​ ​something​ ​that​ ​should ​ ​be ​ ​cherished.  

2. Write a letter of complaint. Follow the rules for a business letter, and use the full-block style. The complaint may be about anything you                                                  wish (such as malfunctioning equipment, poor building maintenance, or disruptive noises from a nearby office). You can base your letter on                                          a true experience, or you can make up all the details you need. (for this question I choose to make the complaint due to the building                                                  maintenance). Dear superintendent, as resident of Building 721, it is your responsibility to oversee repairs and maintenance. In the past                                        month, the building which you supervise has been leaking in certain areas. There are lights out in the hallways which can cause accidents                                              that did not need to happen, in some apartments, the ceiling is leaking and the air conditioning not functioning and there are paint peeling                                                from the wall. This state of repair is unacceptable to many of the tenants in the building and we would like these issues to be addressed                                                    within the next month or I will write a complaint to the building owner to see what can be done about the situation if nothing is done I will                                                          file a complaint to the district of Housing and Livability. I truly hope that this is a one-time occurrence because I have been impressed in the                                                    past with your skills at seeing what needs to be done around our shared building. I appreciate your understanding in this matter and look                                                forward ​ ​to ​ ​seeing ​ ​the ​ ​repairs ​ ​that ​ ​you ​ ​will ​ ​hopefully ​ ​undertake ​ ​shortly.  

Sincerely,