Final assessment ENGL 135

Alex, your summary is very informative, and your persuasive response makes effective use of evidence from the article. This is good work, but your parenthetical references need to be more precise and your explanations in the persuasive response need to be more concise (note that the assignment guidelines specify 300-500 words). These parameters are meant to help people focus and tighten their writing. See my marginal comments for some specific advice about how to repair the citations and clarify some of your points.