Braniga and 6B

The introduction that has been used in the essay introduces the whole paper by offering an insight into what basketball is and when it was created and by whom. The introduction offers a description of how basketball has gained popularity over the past years and its growth today(History of basketball). The introduction still introduces the whole paper by explaining how the sport became global.

4. Is the thesis statement clear? Does it have a central idea? Is it clearly established and maintained throughout the essay?

The thesis statement used in the essay is clear, offering a central idea of what is discussed in the essay. The thesis statement offers an insight into how the essay will be arranged, and it is clearly established and maintained throughout the essay.

5. Does the essay have a central idea, for example, how the particular event/s (that writer mentioned) changed the writer? Or what education did the writer learn from the evident/s?

The essay has a central idea where the writer could learn about the events. The writer could learn that one has to have a laser-sharp focus in the game of basketball since once mistakes have been made, then they can affect the game will turn out. For example, a team was down by three points in the AAU basketball game, having only twenty seconds remaining, and what the team had to do in order to win the match was to shut down the possession of the opposing team.

6. Does the essay have many examples to support ideas (topic sentences)?

There are many examples that have been used in the essay to support the ideas and examples can be seen in every paragraph in the body part of the essay.

7. Are the topic sentences (subtitles) developed well?

All the topic sentences used in the essay have been developed well, and they are relevant to the main issues of discussion. The essay is clear and concise and through that addressing all its audiences well.

8. Has the paper addressed audiences well?

The essay talks about how basketball was developed globally and used examples that relate to everyone hence addressing the audiences well.

9. Does the essay have a good conclusion?

The conclusion used in the essay is good because it offers what was learned from writing the essay.

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