assessment 1 class 9

Your presentation on obesity did not address the requirements of the scoring guide. You need to discuss obesity within a specific state or community not the entire United States.

Your presentation Uses current APA to format citations and references, but with numerous errors. Specific errors noted relate to: • Your references are not formatted according to APA requirements 

you did a good job discussing obesity in the United States. Your paper does not identify a critical health care issue within a specific community. To earn a distinguished grade, you need to describe a critical health care issue within a specific community, and provide statistical information related to frequency, severity, and population most affected. Ask yourself who in the state or county is most affected and what is the severity of that effect?”

Your paper does not recommend ways to expand the scope of interventions to target a critical health issue. To earn a distinguished grade, you need to recommend evidence-based ways to expand the scope of interventions to target a critical health issue in terms of cost, efficiency and access, and effectiveness. You also need to classify the interventions as conventional or unconventional interventions.”

Your paper discussed national interventions. Please research a specific state or community that has identified obesity as a community crisis and discuss specific interventions implemented. Please remember to discuss the programs effectiveness or goals. You also need to discuss the duration and how the program is communicated to the community.”

PLEASE HIGHLIGHT YOUR CHANGES AND ADDITIONS.